Night Light
by georgianau

Comment:
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

A most unusual submission that fully meets the challenge.

What a striking image, those little lights against the dark skies are most appealing. Your exposure is good with good detail throughout. Probably the only thing I would have altered is the composition, I find the pole rather too central and would have preferred it to be placed on one of the thirds possibly the top left hotspot for the top of the pole. This would have left the lights radiating out in a very attractive way and given more impact to the end result.

Thank you for a lovely submission, Sid

w a t e r s • e d g e
by Ja-9

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Congratulations on your second placing for a very appealing image that fully meets the challenge.

Your landscape is most suitably chosen for the challenge being all about the quality of the light. Not only do we get the benefit of the lovely skies but we get the lovely reflections too.

The exposure is good throughout with nice detail and tones. Your composition is good though I think I would have given slightly more emphasis on the water and placed the horizon a little higher to take advantage of more reflections and plant silhouette shapes.

Another very pleasing submission Janine well done, Sid

New Light
by chrispyphotos

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A very appealing image that meets the challenge well.

This is a lovely family moment captured for posterity and one that I'm sure the proud parents will cherish for the rest of their lives, so very well done for recording this cherished opportunity.

The light from the window is massively overexposed but needs to be to accurately expose for the most important parts of the image. This is where I think perhaps just a half stop less exposure would have brought the brightest parts on the families features just that bit further away from near overexposure. I'm looking in particular at the baby's hat, the back of his hands and his forehead, they are all dangerously close to the limit.

Your choice of aperture is giving a pleasing DOF but your focus is a little inaccurate, the lady looks a lot sharper than the man's face and the baby who feel just a tad on the soft side, both of whom are essential to have in an equally sharp focus.

A lovely appealing entry that has been equally appreciated here so well done, Sid

Light reflection
by clickodak

Comment:
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An interesting take that meets the challenge well.

You have come up with an interesting concept to fulfil the challenge, your chosen scene adds further appeal. Your chosen aperture has created a shallow DOF and your focus is softly on the reflection which actually works quite well.

I do find the lamp itself which is in sharp focus rather bright and overpowering it dominates over the much more appealing lower half of the shot. I think a crop excluding the lamp would improve the shot a lot. I've just noticed one of your commenters remarks which seems to concur with what I have just said.

Thanks Marcel for an interesting approach to the challenge, Sid

face on the stone1
by Fourth_Eye

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An interesting take that meets the challenge well.

Well, I feel your image deserved a lot higher score than you received but at the same time I can fully understand why it didn't, most people here will see pure black and move on, they will not search as fully for the ghost as they need to. It is for that reason that I like your submission, I like any image that involves a little more effort.

As regards the 'face' are you saying that you waited in front of a blank tombstone for an hour and the moon shone through revealing this apparition? Because the face is the most important element I think a closer crop excluding the confusing base would have been better. We have your technical details but given the very dark exposure I assume you were in manual exposure mode?

Now, how much credence do I place in your description? Its certainly an interesting anecdote, thanks, Sid.

Back from the 40's
by mrjssims

Comment:
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A reasonable attempt that meets the challenge well.

You've achieved the desired effect on your subject but he just feels rather static and uninteresting. The lighting is uneven with the right of your 'ghost' much lighter than the left with a clear dividing line just right of centre top to bottom.

I'm not sure if you intended to have a ghost of the door too but the double exposure on the door for me spoils the effect in a way that is detrimental to the end result as a whole. Also spoiling the image is the lean to the right, it would benefit from straightening. A crop excluding all of the right up to the darker doorway would also help. I don't want to appear too negative, your commenters and voters have obviously appreciated it more than I but my suggestions are the things that I would have done to improve it.

Thanks for your submission, Sid

Blind Ghost
by CameliaM

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An interesting image that meets the challenge well.

I have to echo the thoughts of one of your commenters and commend you for a well thought out plan, the end result is a ghostly image that works very well. I love her well defined shape on the blinds against the missing sections of her in between the light filled gaps. Good old mom!

You have overexposure from the external daylight but this is inevitable given the shooting situation. I think a tighter crop may have improved the end result, I don't think you need the full doorway at all, or even the full standing figure, a crop that just has the essential upper body cropped to just above her head and no doorway would work better for you. You do have a slight lean to the right which could be corrected as part of a crop if you decided to try it.

Thanks for an interesting take on the challenge, Sid

Free flight
by wiesener

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An interesting image presumed to meet the challenge.

An interesting moment taken against a cold looking winter landscape. The composition fails in as much as the strong focal point of the paraglider is just far too central. I don't know if you have cropped from a larger original but just taking what we have here I would suggest that a far stronger composition would be to move towards a more traditional aspect ratio with the figure in the top right flying in towards the rest of the image. You could remove all that white from the top and crop to just above him, I think it would make for a better result.

Thank you for your submission, Sid

Safe Travels
by mlhannah

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A portrait with a difference assumed to meet the challenge.

I do like an original approach to any photography and this fits the bill in that respect. I like the hat, the exposure is good and your choice of aperture has enabled detail in the facial features as well as the goggles. As a straightforward portrait in natural light it does the job.

This, I'm afraid, is where I part company with your commenters, because I do not like the goggles and as they are such an integral part of the image unfortunately it does not work for me. In most portraits the most important element are the eyes, as they say, the soul is held there so the fact that we cannot see his eyes at all means it does not work for me at all. Perhaps I am completely missing the point, if it is intended as a fun image I wish it were a little more obvious. Given your additional information about the sandstorm I doubt it is intended as a fun image the sand on his face confirms that but how many of your viewers would have realised this is in doubt.

Thanks for your submission, Sid

Leland Sunset
by Drake

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A pleasing scene assumed to meet the challenge.

This tranquil scene is all about the quality of light, the gentle rays leading us from bright sunlight to the inner portion of the scene and the illuminated hulls reflected in the water, the very things that obviously attracted you in the first place. It's a shame the boat on the left is such an ugly beast.

Apart from the gentler brighter light the scene is generally low key and fairly monotone, verging towards black and white with subtle colouring. The only parts of the image that break that quality are the American flag on the left and, this is where I have the only problem with the image, the person on the left. He is so extremely positioned right on the edge of the frame that he would be better cropped out. If your original has more scene to the left then he should be included as his presence definitely adds but not in this extreme position. If he were to be added with space around him then he also ought to be dodged to subdue his colouring more in keeping with the rest of the image.

Thank you for an interesting submission, Sid