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Exceed speed limits
08/29/2015 01:37:23 PM
Exceed speed limits
by clickodak

Comment:
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

An interesting image that meets the challenge well.

Ah, the things we have to do for our craft! Well done and thanks for enduring the hardships, your image is very well composed. I like that you have gone for the red light dominating the image with the bright headlights clearly an evident but insignificant element overall. Its also enabled you to get the road signs well illuminated. The tilt adds a quirky element to the overall result. All in all, a good effort, well done marcel.

Apologies for the delayed critique, as they say, better late than never, Sid
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•  s  w  o  r  d  p  l  a  y  •
08/29/2015 01:29:31 PM
• s w o r d p l a y •
by Ja-9

Comment:
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

An intriguing image that meets the challenge well.

Lovely colours against the black background it makes for a very effective abstract. I like the implied diagonal composition and the way the colours merge together with clear separate red and green sections.

I'm not really sure how you have done this, it looks like some sort of light painting with green and red lights, its the shapes that are the intriguing element, very interesting. Well done Janine.

Apologies for the delayed critique, as they say, better late than never, Sid
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Enchanted Arboretum
08/29/2015 01:20:54 PM
Enchanted Arboretum
by Pangurban

Comment:
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

An interesting image that meets the challenge.

I'm intrigued by what you have done here. I assume the shot has been taken at night, and what a dark night it seems but the lighting is what is bugging me, there is no way I can conceive that you have illuminated this like this yourself, so I assume the lighting is as provided by the Arboretum themselves?

I have to agree with your commenter, given the softness throughout I think this probably camera shake. If you haven't used a remote control you could use the camera's self timer to overcome this problem.

Apologies for the delayed critique, as they say, better late than never, Sid
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Sweet Gum Seed Pod - Liquidambar Styraciflua
08/29/2015 01:11:10 PM
Sweet Gum Seed Pod - Liquidambar Styraciflua
by aliqui

Comment:
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

An interesting image that meets the challenge well.

What an interesting plant you have here, I like it. The colours are very appealing especially against the lovely colour of the leaf.

Your lighting technique has worked well to give a generally uniform and even result though there are one or two brighter spots they are still well detailed. I am not so keen on the OOF areas in the foreground, I see you are either at or close to the limit with your aperture at f20. Given that I would have preferred for the focus point to have been moved closer so that they were in focus, this may well have made the background even softer but I think that would have been acceptable and preferable.

Apologies for the delayed critique, as they say, better late than never, Sid
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Mother Nature fights back
08/29/2015 06:25:06 AM
Mother Nature fights back
by chrispyphotos

Comment:
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

An appealing image that meets the challenge.

A scene of decay and intrusion of mans ingenious devices to invade the dominion of nature will always ultimately be overcome by nature's ability to fight back as reflected in your title and comments, or at least we should hope it can. Your scene captures that sentiment well, a good find. I like the way the old machinery is forming a sort of static equivalent of a hanging basket for the vegetation.

Your composition is good with the machine dominating the foreground but I find all the colours just a little too saturated. The exposure is a little on the dark side but then that sort of fits the mood that you are trying to convey here. The detail is good throughout except for the black area on the right but that sort of adds to the mood.

Apologies for the delayed critique, better late than never, Sid
Horseshoe Frame
08/29/2015 06:02:20 AM
Horseshoe Frame
by TonyT

Comment:
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

Congratulations for your high placing with this appealing landscape that meets the challenge well.

A classic scene captured in a classic way, this popular location once more delivers the goods! In terms of the challenge the river is perfectly and naturally framed by the surrounding cliffs. The water is well contrasted with the red stone of the surroundings.

The lighting is fairly flat but conducive to a good even exposure so you have good detail throughout, though the highlights on the water, particularly the left, look close to the limit they are a relatively small but important part of the scene. Your DOF is good with acceptable sharpness throughout. I find the top left corner a little distracting it intrudes in a way that doesn't add to the overall result and looks as though there is some CA with it too, I think it would have been better if you could have excluded it, though it looks as though it was probably difficult. I'm not keen on the red border, I would prefer it without.

Thanks for making such a significant contribution to the challenge, Sid
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View Thru The Trees
08/29/2015 05:39:14 AM
View Thru The Trees
by Drake

Comment:
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

An interesting image that meets the challenge fully.

Its good to see that you have looked for and found a location to enhance the scene with the natural foliage which, of course, fulfils the challenge brief. The only problem is that the foreground frame dominates the scene to the extent that there is too little of the actual scene itself. Given the nature of the scene with the breaking wave I think we should get a full and clear view of both the lighthouse and the wave at least. The walkway looks like an interesting structure I wish we could see more of.

Your timing is good in capturing the breaking wave as you have. Assuming you were in aperture priority the chosen aperture/ISO combination has given you a working shutter speed that captures the action whilst allowing some motion too. The foreground is sufficiently soft to direct attention through to where you want it. The red of the lighthouse stands out very effectively too.

It's unfortunate you didn't receive any comments during the challenge, I hope this makes up for it, thanks for your entry, Sid.
Waiting pollinator
08/27/2015 01:40:38 PM
Waiting pollinator
by clickodak

Comment:
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

An appealing floral study that meets the challenge.

Your focus is clearly on the flower and your DOF is appropriate and the off-centre composition works well. I see one of your commenters has remarked about over-exposure, persoanlly I think you have taken it just about as far as is acceptable but by doing so you have got better whites with little or no loss of detail, which for me is fine. You do have some chromatic aberration on the white petal, there is green/blue fringe all round the edge, this ought to be rectified in ACR

Please forgive the long delay in this critique, I hope you feel the image and critique are both still relevant, Sid.
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Nuccio’s Cameo - Camellia japonica
08/27/2015 07:53:41 AM
Nuccio’s Cameo - Camellia japonica
by Ja-9

Comment:
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

An appealing flower study that meets the challenge well.

A very competent image of the camelia composed in an appealing off centre way. I disagree with one of your commenters I think the chosen aperture is most appropriate giving you a DOF with just the right amount of softness and detail.

I wouldn't mind seeing the occasional flower study without the seemingly obligatory water drops! It looks like you have used flash which is illuminating the front of the floor a little too much for me. I would prefer to see the natural hues and shadows, a lot of the natural delicate detail has been lost here through the use of flash.

Please forgive the long delay in this critique, I hope you feel the image and critique are both still relevant, Sid.
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Light Swerve
08/27/2015 07:40:14 AM
Light Swerve
by PhotoshopedToilet

Comment:
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

Your entry meets the challenge well.

You have met the challenge well in that the main subject, the light trail, is illuminated and not by the sun. It is very low to the ground and obviously not a cycle light, is it a model car with a flashlight attached?

There is some potential for improvement that I would like to talk about. First the illuminated trail is over-exposed with no detail remaining. There is a large area of similarly over-exposed area that is not related to the main subject and is detracting from the main subject. The whole image would benefit from less exposure to darken the scene down to allow us to concentrate on just that which is relevant to the scene. The scene itself is not contributing to the image at all, a more relevant scene would be preferable. Within this scene there are elements such as the post box on the left edge of frame that really should not be there at all. There is a distracting green streak of light on the house that detracts and should not be there.

It's a shame you have not entered any challenges since this, please don't let this put you off, entering and learning from the community here. I've just noticed CEJ's comment, I concur wholeheartedly with his remarks, Sid
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