Golden Gate Bridge
by faidoi

Comment:
excellent composition! looks just like a postcard. you sure nailed this one!

lights.jpg
by maxj

Comment:
looks like somebody's having a bit too much fun...

you might consider putting a bit of annotation in the photog notes, explaining just what it is that you've rendered here. this is a very wild image, and it makes an interesting abstract. there are a couple spots you might want to go back over in ps: a big, round one towards the bottom right, and a cluster of little ones near the lower left. while you're at it, you might take a look at this with a colored layer behind this. i'll bet red would be very interesting...

Message edited by author 2005-02-22 21:31:35.

dont hold your breath
by maxj

Comment:
nice shot, max! good job with the lighting, especially the catchlights. as a portrait, the cropping is a bit out of balance, in that you would want to probably crop an equal portion off the top to balance what you took off the chin. in portraiture, the rule of thirds still applies. you might consider cropping off 15% off the right.

as for scanning, be careful. i have got a ton of stuff that needs rescanning, because i wasn't careful enough the first time through. keep your bed clean, keep your prints clean, and take your time. you might consider wearing the gloves, just to avoid any oils and smudges.

keep it up! more! more!

[also, when you upload to your portfolio, go on and trim the '.jpg' off the title--it makes for a better presentation.]

Message edited by author 2005-02-22 20:39:17.

Tulip
by jenesis

Comment:
excellent work, jennifer. the colors are wonderful, as are the textures. keep it up!

Brothers
by Imagineer

Comment:
wow, jon! i bet they light up every room they enter!

bridge over troubled water
by eirasi

Comment:
this feels COLD! excellent capture. it looks slightly over-sharpened, but not enough to take away from the overall image.

The joys in life are so simple.
by tolovemoon

Comment:
well, tracy, your notes say it all! you captured the image you sought out, and it is one that would never get a justifiable score. just don't let the scoring deter you!

My Picasso
by Neil

Comment:
as usual, great effort, highly underappreciated! you cleaned up with the commenters, which is about as much as we can hope for. keep it up!!!

Red
by debitipton

Comment:
nicely done! i love the 'peeking in' pose, that says a lot about which side of the lens you would rather be on, doesn't it?

this is me [i hope]
by whiteroom

Comment:
what a rip! this finished nowhere near where it should have! great work, lesley, keep it up!!