Beth
by ericwoo

Comment:
Looks like a candid moment, and I *love* candid moments. Then tend to give you an insight into the person that you can't get out of a posed portrait. It would make more sense if her left hand was actually touching something (her hair, her face, her veil).

Beth
by ericwoo

Comment:
Same as my last comment. Love that veil! One of the prettiest I've seen. And in this image, I like that you got her to smile. Ditto the background.

Beth
by ericwoo

Comment:
It's a really nice pose. I love that you can see her long veil. It's much more detailed than most. Just wish she had a neutral background behind her.

Beth
by ericwoo

Comment:
Too blown out for my tastes. I want to see more details in her dress. She probably paid lots of money for the dress simply because of those details, so she'll want to see the details too.

Beth
by ericwoo

Comment:
Cute pose. :-)

Beth
by ericwoo

Comment:
This is really nice. It shows some details that are often ignored and even the background is subdued here.

Beth
by ericwoo

Comment:
This looks to be the same angle as the one I said was my favorite. And I love that you included the bouquet and that I can see her ring and even the patterns on her dress. It's that background that is distracting me. I want to focus on her, not keep looking at the background.

Beth
by ericwoo

Comment:
I think this is probably my favorite because of the angle, the focus on the eyes and her smile. Wish her fingers weren't cut off though.

Beth
by ericwoo

Comment:
I like the angle. I like the sharp focus on the eyes. I'd like to either see more of the bouquet or not at all. Right now it brings my eyes down there to wonder what I'm looking at, only to go away dissatisfied because I can only imagine.

Message edited by author 2007-05-27 16:19:03.

Beth
by ericwoo

Comment:
I think you're trying to show off her ring here with the hand placement, but for me this isn't working. It just doesn't feel all that natural for her to bring her arm across her chest like that to put her hand on her shoulder. I'd suggest something like putting her hand up by her face or something ... gotta get creative and, granted, you were doing that, all I'm saying is this one doesn't do it for me.