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| 01/21/2007 10:39:28 PM |
"I swear, I'll start working out.......tomorrow"by UbersteinyComment: From the Critique Club
How are you doing today? I am going to touch on a few items with your image.
Colour;
Your colour looks fairly nice here, I just think there is a bit to much yellow on your chest, which could be from your spotlight? everything else seems to balance nicely, the blue/gray of the shorts matches the weights, your skin tone matches the carpet, bottle lable matches wieghts. Very nice job.
DOF/Focus;
Focus looks really great here, everything apears to be in focus. I can even make out the carpet strands, and read the beer label.
Post;
You didn't do much for post, and mostly it appears you didn't have to. The blacks look black the lights are light, and the medium tones are nice. One thing I might have done, is maybe dodge a bit on the chair, to see more of the leg coming down, and a hint of seat. Just a horizon't glint you might say. The way it appears now, at first glance you seem to be floating.
Off Items;
As I said before, your chest seems a bit yellow. Also, the back of your head fades a tad much I think into the background. A really soft highlight to see the back of your head may give a stronger feel. You could do this with a reflector.
Other;
I think this is a clever idea. You captured the procrastination very well. I just noticed the beer cap still on the bottle? I am assuming it was left to see the top of the bottle., if that is the case you might have angled the light a bit different to get the top. But if that is not the case and a highlight.. than you are good to go.
Nice Job
Andrew 'littlegett' |
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| 01/21/2007 02:10:20 PM |
Cold-Feetby JutildaComment: This is bizzar, I like it. 6-;. It appears to be a dogs leg/paw. However the shaggy hair coming down throws you and makes one wonder.. hmmm what else could it be? The texture of the snow on the ground I think really makes this image great. So many little details, and I would hang something like this on my wall. Because people would stop look at it and go ... Ummm Hey, What is this? L()L Great way to start a conversation. Nice work. |
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| 01/21/2007 01:59:15 PM |
IMG_2388-01a.jpgby dwterryComment: This is really great, Maybe just a lower angle a bit. of camera location. But everything here looks great I really enjoy the tones and contrasts here. Very nice work. |
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| 01/21/2007 01:57:04 PM |
IMG_0084.jpgby dwterryComment: I love the angle, the lighting is also great. However, it isn't the most flattering way to shoot a wedding couple imo. Basiclly it creates a double chin effect for both of them. Even though I really do like this extreme amount of angle I have to wonder, if there is possibly another way to pose the couple a little more flattering and keep the angle? Hmmm. Very nice work, I will have to come back to your port when I have more time. |
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| 01/20/2007 03:14:57 PM |
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| 01/20/2007 03:13:21 PM |
Sparklesby ValdoComment: This image is wonderful. Very nice work here. I find this very dramatic and pulls you into the image more. Very nice. |
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| 01/20/2007 03:06:55 PM |
Joyah Days Bay Aug 2006 20by joynimComment: This is a very nice image, personally, I would crop the white portion of the very top off, I think it would create a better composition and hold the viewer inside the image. Very lovely. |
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| 01/20/2007 03:00:18 PM |
Another Irisby GreetmirComment: The colours here are very wonderful. the DOF is a bit shallow for me, I would like to see more clarity in the petals. Mostly the outside edges. it is a wonderful image. |
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| 01/20/2007 02:57:51 PM |
Tree In Evening Lightby GreetmirComment: There is just something about trees in the evening. The Dramatic flair the twisted and turned and straight and curved branches give is simply amazing. You did a very nice job with this image. |
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| 01/20/2007 02:55:05 PM |
Prettyby GreetmirComment: (returned)
This is a very dramatic image you captured here. My taste could be a tad sharper, but as it is, it still stopped me to look deeper in. I first noticed the glints of what may be spiderweb? than I noticed the Fly. Least it looks like a fly. I think the DOF is wonderful also, really grabbed my attention. |
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