Black & White
by soup

Comment:
this is a very excellent composition. It seems like you fell short with the sharpness of focus though. Did you use a macro lens? If not, then maybe backing up a bit and cropping would work. also notice it is not a square on view. i think this would have been a bit more effective than the slight angle. But again, i really like the composition. -8

Wine & Corkscrew
by jonpink

Comment:
whoa, i feel like its gonna fall of the table!! the colors balance well in this photo and i like the lighting. good job!

Soda & Ice
by katlyn

Comment:
im not sure about the green table top, seems off balance. Maybe a wider DOF would help too.

Guns and Bullets
by Armadillo

Comment:
is that an airsoft gun? (red tip) Great composition, technically sound. I like the border too.

Lock & Keys
by faidoi

Comment:
nice composition, i like the DOF

music maker
by Poison IV

Comment:
guitar and pick! focus and sharpness seem off though, maybe you were too close to the subject without a macro lens?

My Wife & I Fit Together Quite Well, Thank You.
by drgsoell

Comment:
interesting idea! Compositionally sound. I think maybe the feel is a little soft though. Perhaps a bit more direct lighting and black and white would be better.

war and money
by Seanachai

Comment:
well...technically this photograph is excellent but its a little cheesy. Well, maybe thats not right word for such a sobering subject. My point is, war is a serious subject, of a sort, and the plastic soldiers seem to be satirical, and I'm not sure if your point is satirical or not.

Crochet hook and Mohair yarn
by Bela45

Comment:
it seems that lighting is a bit harsh and intense for an interesting composition, perhaps an indirect source of lighting and a more interesting angle would give this more artistic merit

Lucky Number 3
by jayke

Comment:
good DOF