Family Outing
by blemt

Comment:
The humans are dwarfed by the huge statuary. It's hard to find something to really concentrate on. I wish the people were larger and more focused upon. Hope this helps as a suggestion.

Lounging on the Boat
by thsulliv

Comment:
Nice and unposed. I'll elaborate now that I take a second look. The colors are nice and not overdone. The skintones are quite natural. It's not the greatest shot on earth, but it has such a nice warm fuzzy feel and definitely speaks family. Thanks for the smile.

Family are greeted with open arms
by burtct

Comment:
The stop action is really intresting. I think the overall shadows is a bit distracting as is the placement of the birds at the bottom. Maybe up the colors just a smidge too. I hope this helps.

After a long happy day
by Bebe

Comment:
Nice candid pose. On second view, I thought I'd elaborate a little more. The combination of the pillow and the couch print is a bit busy and it's hard for the eye to focus on the subjects of the photo. Maybe eliminate the area to the right of his elbow, which wouild still leave their faces, and one of each hand. Just a thought.

Carcia Papaya
by ramadurai

Comment:
This is a clear photo with very nice coloration, but it's a bit blah for my taste. It's missing the ZING that really makes it a powerful photo. I think cropping the larger ones at the bottom and zooming in on the upper part might be a bit more appealing to me. Hope this helps.

My family
by gudbjargarson

Comment:
I didn't comment on this originally until I could look at it more and spend some time on it. The angle of her face is a bit confusing. The coloration is natural and not overdone. The lighting is fine.... I can't put my finger on it. Maybe if she were lying on her stomach with her face propped up?

Basement blues
by lyta

Comment:
This is lacking a true focal point. I like the title and the blue filter, but maybe find one thing and really pull the eye toward it. The laundry basket is too dark to truly be a point of interest. Maybe just the jackets hanging with one for each family member? Hope this helps.

Sisters
by LucidLotus

Comment:
I think I would have liked either the kettle on the stove OR the set of shoes done seperately, so the eye could appreciate them for their own merit. Together, it's a tad too busy for my taste. But the sepia and the clarity of the details is good all the way around.

Snapshot
by aznym

Comment:
This is a nice natural capture. I like the muted saturation and almost lack of midtone coloration. I just like the simple snapshot moment being caught by another person.

Where is dad?
by garlic

Comment:
I wish it was a tighter shot of the boys. I love them all bundled up. Maybe crop out all but the picnic table and lighten it up a bit.