Log/Log
by GeneralE

Comment:
Interesting lighting, interesting composition. Refreshing!

Before Discman & Ipod...
by CrystalFury

Comment:
Hmmm where to begin.... I like the idea here - however - execution... The light is far too bright on the surface of the walkman and causes very dark shadows in the fg. Using fill flash, or a 2nd light source would correct that. Also, the wrinkled cloth gives the image a very rough and thrown together feel. And one last thing, if your going to include the headphones in the shot, I think they should be included completely, not having the wire leave and reenter the image. I hope you find this helpful.

combine
by cm0783

Comment:
This shot looks very washed out and flat due to overexposure. Adjusting contrast could help somewhat, also a less centered composition would be more interesting.

Effete
by striderx77

Comment:
The uneven lighting hurts this shot, as does the busy bg. Propping a white card behind your subject would give this image a much cleaner look.

Backstage Venice
by unicum

Comment:
You shot in harsh light, but handled it well. Lovely image.

Fading into the past.
by Douglas

Comment:
I really like the idea, and you executed it well, my only nit is the lighting (which is uneven and dark) and the carpet is distracting.

Cellular Victim
by rbenny

Comment:
The composition includes so many distracting elements and the main subject (the phone) looks out of focus. I would suggest simplifying the shot to just the telephone and maybe a little space around it on one side or the other for an off-centered composition.

remember cutting and pasting?
by lakritstroll

Comment:
I understand what you were going for here - but I don't think you hit your mark. The items look scattered, not composed , also fewer items would have helped to draw the eye where you want the viewer to go.

35mm
by howardj

Comment:
Crisp and clean. I like the composition, but wish the focus was on the FG roll rather than the BG one.

Caboose
by internerd2k

Comment:
This image was captured in very harsh light, shooting early in the morning or late in the afternoon would create a softer light, and more attractive image. Also, I would suggest using fill flash to help balance the light.