Overlap
by pharry

Comment:
beautiful colour and texture

Sufi Dance
by Aliaa

Comment:
love the colour and movement

Fashionista
by Purple_Girl

Comment:
for me this top and the models disinterested look dont help this, the top is persnal taste but from a fashion shoot point of view i dislike the off the shoulder and the hand position, the back of her arm on show as well is not appealing. the light is flat and the eyes dull. the eyes should always pop. you need mopre contrast in your light, have a key light and a fill light set at different power. also the other arm that we can only see a bit of, whats it there for waht it doing needs to be moving or seen more. my guess would be first time model.

Glancing
by crowis

Comment:
too mich skin smoothing on the fore head looks unnatural tone it back a bit

Making Jam
by gyaban

Comment:
Cette image est typiquement française. Comment ça va la confiture?! J'espère que c'est vraiment bien!

back to me, the slightly blown highlight on your elbow and the off yellow of the background is a slight let down for your normal level of perfection. 8

oooohhh
by Giles

Comment:

Originally posted by Art Roflmao: Well I gave it a 10, but since you mentioned she was your EX girlfriend, I'm deducting 4 points - show me a pic of your new girlfriend and I might give them back. :P (kidding, I gave it a 6) If you want a real critique from me, here it is: Obviously I was not put off by the gratuitous skinnage - the lighting is excellent, but there is something off-putting about the angle or perspective. Also, a shallower dof or more distance from that bkg might have improved it. As for the challenge topic - I would guess more voters saw this as just a gratuitous shoehorn-ish entry. That's my take on it, FWIW. Don't let these results eat at ya - there is nothing you can do about it and you KNOW many have tried. :)

it doesnt bother me really just dont want dpc to become sterile conservative and safe like its heading, i like edgy and out there

trust me this was not a shoe horn but the first thing that came ino my head would have violated the non naughty bits rule, and she was up for it, shes a bonny lass ;)

just prefer people to say : vote: 1 : I" dont like to see women in underwear" or this is to suggestive etc but ppl dont which is a shame,

Levitation
by mqnaufal

Comment:
Be interesting to see if it survives validation, I'm guessing you cloned out the cocktail sticks, I'd think that's pushing it for advanced but will leave it to sc. I google imaged searched for this challenge and a sea of these came up, surprised this did so well given its a cliche of sorts. I gave it a 5, unimaginative and not particularly amazingly executed lighting was flat and It just didn't wow me. Not to take credit away or have a go just wanted to give my honest opinion, was a good score and well done on your ribbon, it's just didn't connect with me.

this is what i meant re lighting //500px.com/photo/5306378

edit for spelling

Message edited by author 2012-09-26 03:45:24.

oooohhh
by Giles

Comment:
5 x 1s

9 x 2

12 x 3

13 x 4

I should have done a bland safe sliced banana shot, shame no one considered focus, lighting, composition but voted on personal believes. What's happened to dpc when did it get so safe and conservative. They used to have nude challenges on here, I'm going to keep plugging away despite my score.

Shame the haters are cowards as well, say if you don't like it, stick your head above the parapet and let your disgust at a girl in a bra known.

Ps picked this one as it was funny, made me laugh as its a bit cheeky

This was from third shoot with my ex girlfriend who models for me :)

mine
by Giles

Comment:
Actually sigma 50 1.4 shot at 1.4 :)

Ring of Fire
by mbrutus2009

Comment:
i did this one in single light sorce and it didnt fair nearly as well as yours well done.