subtle submission, total resignation
by docpjv

Comment:
I like the composition and the focus, but it's not sharp.

Tired of School!
by nruter

Comment:
Great shot, but I wish I couldn't see a white linen backdrop. A dark background might have worked better, or even the view outside a window, especially if it looked classroomish.

A typical day in high school...
by cwalmye

Comment:
Good idea and good shot. But why the garbage right behind? The context is what's missing: I was looking all over your shot for signs this was a classroom but it doesn't look like one.

Rural Fields
by Judith Polakoff

Comment:
This is a beautiful shot but it's way oversharpened as evidenced by the white halos throughout.

Front Line
by admart01

Comment:
I hate telephone poles, but they sure work well here. Great light and composition.

Red Fuel
by bruski

Comment:
Very cool, nice take on the challenge.

Cordless
by Gordon

Comment:
I am not sure we are talking about telephone lines, but I guess there are many interpretations. And of course, there are other geometric implied lines here.

As to the composition, iIn this nice closeup, I find the extreme blur on the right VERY distracting. Oddly enough, perhaps because it's light, my eyes are drawn to it rather than the focal point. But it's so blurry that it kind of "hurts" your eyes.

A Cloudy Day
by graphicfunk

Comment:
Very nice. I think a small crop of the left might make this even better. But I like it a lot.

Beauty Pageant
by Kylie

Comment:
Nice idea and colorful. I know the tilt is to add interest but I think I would have preferred to avoid the background. Might have been interesting to tilt the other way and include the more "backgroundish" pavement.

Implied On Nature
by RedOak

Comment:
Very cool shot. I would suggest , however, cropping the right hand side pipes out of the shot, or cloning them out.