Phoning Home
by bjoern

Comment:
The birds help... The unlevel horizon and flat processing doesn't.

sign
by posthumous

Comment:
Yes... It's a sign. There's technology everywhere, but you've failed to draw me to it. Not at all a bad street shot though on it's own merit.

Power of Technology
by Ammie

Comment:
Oh. Is it?

Processing isn't bad actually, the subtle shadows and mountains/plants is really nice in truth. But despite that fact, the composition/execution/concept and communication of "technology" all are lacking for me.

Pixels
by nickyb

Comment:
Pixels. Water, colored squares. Not bad, but also not processed very well. *shrug*... I hope it does ok, but I don't love it either.

Technology on the Go
by theluissales

Comment:
Meh. Monorail. Walt Disney World... Meh. I think this just comes off as a family vacation snapshot as it fails entirely to convey "technology" to me as a concept.

sound board
by oldbimmercoupe

Comment:
It's red. It's Yamaha... It's over processed like hell.

*shrug* not bad, not great. Best of the worst I fear.

There Is No Way This Will Ever Fit
by seethroughmylens

Comment:
Oh, so mom bought a new video card huh? So you thought maybe you should enter a snapshot of her trying to install it into a photo contest... Surely you didn't expect to do well?

Technically, it's sharp-ish, but it seems that the best focus in the image is on the dell logo on the motherboard. The story lacks, the composition is not great at all... *shrug* Good try, but you're gonna need to put more thought into composition and execution.

Personally, I would have loved to have just seen a nice macro detail shot of that beautiful card and heatsink.

Wind Power
by Kelli

Comment:
Overprocessed. Like crazy. That is all.

The biggest give away on the crazy processing here is the halos around the trees from tonemapping the image.

My suggestion for next time would be to separate the image into two halves, one the sky half, the other the ground and building, and adjust each separately, I would also suggest cutting back on the tonemapping, it's an awesome tool when used correctly, but a little goes quite a long way. :)

Harness Energy
by LanndonKane

Comment:
I have yet to see a good shot of this subject. Sorry, but it's a good concept, however this particular subject has almost become the unicorn of photography.

Electric milk frother
by hajeka

Comment:
Hmm... Too much negative space. Mostly OOF, point of interest isn't that interesting, and the image doesn't really convey "technology"... More like "gadgetry"...