After all these years...I finally found the light!!!
by danielcheong1974

Comment:
I think a slight fill light behind the book (if that's what it is) would help. Its hard to tell what you are holding. There is just a hard line across your chest.

With Love From Japan
by angkokweng

Comment:
Great composition and exposure. I wish it were a tad warmer so her face wasn't quite so blue.

The Haunting of Saguinus Oedipus
by oscarthepig

Comment:
this is a cool technique. I just wish your relection stood out a bit more. It took me awhile to figure out what I was seeing.

Welcome in a chinese place
by Harlequin

Comment:
Looks like you chose to shoot at the same locale as another entry.
I think this photo would do better as a 16:10 landscape crop. I would crop the top down to the far end of the path....leaving out all the "christmas lights".

Iced Twist
by radarbrat

Comment:
Great twist on the customary "CFL bulb" shot (pun intended)
I think I would try using a deeper DoF to pull the rear twists into focus.

Childhood Wonders
by eqsite

Comment:
Great composition and exposure! I would maybe play with the white balance a bit and warm it up a tad.

Now I Lay Me Down
by izadoodle

Comment:
Great exposure! I just wish the light didn't end so abruptly on the stem

Oil Rigs in the Night
by santiago9er

Comment:
The photo is very dark, and it's hard to make out the subjects when they are so very tiny.

Low Light
by Glanni

Comment:
This photo doesn't really appear to be using artificial light.

a basic worklight
by briantammy

Comment:
I like this photo a lot! Great exposure.
I do think you need either a little more lamp or little more human. Right now you are not quite equal, with a bit more lamp offsetting the photo.
I think it would be best to bring the lamp back a few inches, and include just a lil' more human so that the space between them is in the center of the photo.
I do think it would also work to have unequal amounts of one subject or the other. It would just need to be 2/3 of one and 1/3 of the other.