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Breakout
07/02/2010 08:57:47 AM
Breakout
by pixelpig

Comment:
Oops, I forgot to put this in the comments when I PM'd you:

When I recommended the rear-curtain flash, I thought I'd better play around with it to see if it actually works.

Here's two examples to show you what I was talking about. The first one shows an example with no point in focus. The second one shows (kind of) the idea of the end fork being in focus. It helps give the eye a resting spot.

Just a thought.

I was also wondering whether color would add more interest -- I just went into hue/sat and clicked the colorize button.

btw, with the second curtain flash, I had to dial down the exposure of the flash to about -3EV, otherwise it was way too bright with the setup I was using.





(btw, my fork in the second shot is still a tad fuzzy, because I stopped in that place and waited for the flash, so it burned it there and then added the brighter fork. If I would have kept it moving until the flash, it would have been cleaner.)

(btw, I doubly impressed with your shot after trying this -- it is MUCH harder than it looks! You got a very nice flow with your shot!)

Message edited by author 2010-07-02 08:57:57.
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Breakout
07/01/2010 06:46:51 PM
Breakout
by pixelpig

Comment:
There is something quite appealing about this shot, but something not quite right, as well. The fork tines blur is very appealing, and the lines from the bottom of the fork are quite intriguing. The middle of the fork, where it's being rotated, is not as appealing, but I'm not sure you can do anything about that.

I'd be interested to see what happens if you had the fork in focus at the very end, so you have the motion blur, but there's a resolution. A couple of thoughts on how to achieve this:

1. Do you have an external flash? What about doing the 5 second exposure and then firing the flash at the end. I'm not sure whether this would work, but I think it would.

2. Setting your camera to do a rear curtain flash. I've never tried this, but I believe it will also have the same effect.

3. Silly solution that might work without playing with flash: set up a tripod very near where you're moving the camera. Set the shot for about 5 seconds longer than normal. Start the shot, do your rotations, when you're done rotating, put the lens cap on, put the camera on the tripod, take lens cap off and let it expose for another second or two. The final fork position should then be in focus. (You could try rotating it on the tripod, but then you wouldn't get the undulations.)

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Lastly, you do have a processing problem, but you might not see it on your screen. On my screen, the lower left hand corner isn't black, it's a spotty blue. That's the type of thing that can hurt you the most. I've had this on shots where I've had a black background. The best thing to do is when you're working in photoshop, slowly increase the brightness of the photo and look what happens in your black background, this will show you the areas that you need to burn, clone or just darken in curves (when doing advanced editing.)

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Aahhhhhhhhh...
07/01/2010 11:36:52 AM
Aahhhhhhhhh...
by GiorgioBaruffi

Comment:
haha! Great capture! Love the attitude
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Three amigos
07/01/2010 12:19:00 AM
Three amigos
by Yo_Spiff

Comment:
Awesome shot!! Congrats on the top 10! Whoot!
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Book of Seasons
06/30/2010 09:15:38 PM
Book of Seasons
by FrozenMoments

Comment:
Awesome!! Congrats on a beautiful red!
The Study of Oneself
06/30/2010 09:15:00 PM
The Study of Oneself1st Place
by Walkaboutwolf

Comment:
All right!!! Congrats on the blue -- and what an awesome score!
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MMMM...Bread
06/29/2010 11:21:54 AM
MMMM...Bread
by Vpphoto

Comment:
This could have been a much better shot (imo) if you had recomposed to get more of the girl and less of the foreground bread because of the small depth of field. Your tilt is actually quite effective, but unfortunately, the oof bread really draws your eye away from the more interesting aspects of the shot.
Tourist
06/29/2010 11:18:53 AM
Tourist
by anilsharma35

Comment:
Sorry, I'm not anti-blur, but I don't think it helps this shot. If it were sharp, I would have liked it very much. Nice tilt, good subject, blur doesn't work, imo.
A tribute to Deb's "Ode to Joy"
06/28/2010 09:45:54 PM
A tribute to Deb's "Ode to Joy"
by Prash

Comment:
oh wow!! I want to go there!
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Bugzeye
06/28/2010 07:01:20 PM
Bugzeye
by Paul

Comment:
This is a really cool shot! I love the non-existent background (but I'm partial to that, even though some people really don't like it.) I'd actually be tempted to clone out the petals of the flower and just leave the stamen.
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