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| 05/16/2003 06:37:07 PM |
Divinityby magnusComment: Not to take anything away from this image, but I don't think the "skewing" you mention in your notes is allowed by normal DPC editing rules. |
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| 05/16/2003 03:07:02 AM |
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| 05/15/2003 09:02:01 PM |
Intrigueby DiversqComment: Originally posted by brentg3: I like:
The bright colors
Fore and mid ground seems punchy
good clear subjects
Stuff I don't like:
backgound is a bit busy
red stairs distracts eye
cropping is a bit tight overall
microphones messy
I dont seem to get a clear idea of what you are trying to say here with this shot?
I would like to see the background blurred either with DOF (preferably) or in post processing.. |
I think the intended feeling is of a little kid enraptured by what is "obviously" exotic (to her locale) music and musicians. But without reading the photographer's comments it's hard to get that feeling -- and the business of the background makes it look like a candid snapshot of an ethereal moment quickly captured.
I actually like the musician peering down between the mic stands to look at the kid; I think it helps convey the impression this is more than a momentary tableau.
I have two suggestions to help emphasize these aspects. I'd change the title to something a little more direct and hopefully recognizable or triggering thoughts of another title; my "best" idea so far is "Fascinatin' Rhythm."
Since the upper right corner is busy, and the lower left empty, I'd create two triangular masks in the corners, and either ghost back (fade) the image in those areas, or fill them with a border color and add explanatory type in those areas (still thinking Postcards), leaving the main subject in a highlighted diagonal stripe.
I'll make up rough examples later if you want... |
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| 05/14/2003 06:05:23 PM |
Witch - Craftby BeetleComment: I like the idea a lot. I agree moving her a bit to the left would let you exclude all of the roof. Since this is traditionally a night scene I think I'd have darkened everything up even more, while trying to retain a bit of detail in her robes. (I'll have to try this to see if it's even possible.)
I read somewhere that, despite the Hallowe'en cliche image, the broom was ridden with the bristles facing forward...but then you would have gotten a zillion comments about that!
With as much fun as it looks like you had, and people's comments, you might consider re-shooting this... |
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| 05/13/2003 11:12:56 PM |
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| 05/13/2003 08:31:44 PM |
Black and Whiteby JeanComment: Just to be safe I'd use some bubble gum or something on the right sides of the bases...nice concept, setup. |
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| 05/13/2003 08:29:17 PM |
Frosted Blue Dolphinsby auroraComment: I know at least one person who will want one of these...I wonder what it would look like of you took a bit of the blue out of just the clock face. |
| 05/13/2003 08:22:02 PM |
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| 05/13/2003 08:20:56 PM |
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| 05/13/2003 08:19:34 PM |
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