Conrail 3347...One of the few Blues Left
by OneSweetSin

Comment:

Originally posted by melismatica: ... I don't think the selective desat is working hard enough to create an 'invisible' background. This is because, in spite of the gray tones, there is still quite a bit of business created by the various lines and blocks of shape. There are the v-shaped diagonals created by the roof of the depot, more diagonals in the ramp-like structure that appears just above the train, the curved lines that radiate across the roof of the foremost structure, and the 'box' of stripes created by the structure that is above the ramp-like structure. All this suggest to me that the DOF is simply to deep, creating a flatness to the entire viewing plane. There is no distance between the train, the foremost building, and the highrise which logic tells me is in the distance but which my eyes tell me is in the same space as the train.

You might try to create this effect by creating a mask for everything above the rails and applying some Gaussian Blur.

Peppercorn Blend
by OneSweetSin

Comment:
I really like the crinkly texture; reminds me a little of a photo I did of some lychees. I think the brightest highlights on the white peppercorns are just a little TOO bright (for me); I had a couple of similar spots on my own Macro entry and finally went back and just barely touched them with the burn tool, and it seemed to help.

Given the emphasis on the texture of the individual peppercorns, but the overall amorphous arrangement (unlike some previously-seen yin/yang presentations), I think there may be something vaguely disturbing about the portrait orientation. I probably would have cropped to a square, but I suspect you may have gotten a small bump in your score just by putting it on its side.

I also want to get cute and re-title it Peppercorn Salad : )

Bug in the System
by BobsterLobster

Comment:
Supposedly that's really how the term originalted ...

When Spring Breaths
by dustin03

Comment:
Something about the coloring and lighting reminds me of enamelware ... very nice.

The Dead Pickers Club
by Dim7

Comment:
First off I like the "pun" in the title!

I do do graphic design : )
I agree, the type color does not work that well with the sky color. If you really want the blood-red in the type, then I'd try one of these workarounds:
--create a mask and lighten the blue tones of the sky without changing the birds
--use either a black or white drop-shadow under the type
--change the type to black or white, with a red drop-shadow

Now THAT's What I Call a Balanced Diet!
by GeneralE

Comment:

Originally posted by Spanish_Grease: Overall, I think your idea had merit. It was a bit of stretch to fit the challenge, but it did so in a humorous way. Knowing your work GeneralE, it seems like you were a bit rushed putting this together and couldn't put everything into it. Lee

I think you summed it up nicely!

Digby Peters Cameron
by Sammie

Comment:
What a handy coincidence!

Desert Palms Country
by tfarrell23

Comment:
Looks like this challenge gave you a pretty specific idea!

Dead Presidents Choir
by spydr

Comment:
Not to mention the Triple-A club ... Andrew, Abraham, and Alexander (killed by the Double-A, Aaron).

Delightfully Precious Convertibles
by Damian

Comment:
The water is a great touch. I always have trouble with black type on red, so I'd like it a touch heavier for readability, but it works OK.