Sales Pitch
by ClubJuggle

Comment:
Nice idea, seems a bit dark, but maybe that's because the TV screen contrast. Not thrilled with the cropping, could you have brought it down to just the sign? Or maybe move even distances from the edge of the sign to the edge of the picture.
7 Swash

Sunday Breakfast in McAmerica
by muckpond

Comment:
It's a good enough shot (has a just threw it out there look, that is not a good thing, if you planned this shot out, went through the line several times trying to get just "this look", I will gladly take it back.) The hand of the driver in front of you is in excellent focus (but wait, that wasn't really your subject was it?) Counter person, bag and person receiving food not in focus. Too bad for you I took a second look, you started out as a 7 (good shot, but hadn't thought it through), after really examining this photo, the best I can go is 4. sorry, Swash

Economical Facts
by Remie

Comment:
Excellent mac....(what)...ro (sorry, fell asleep). On your photo itself, I see nothing really wrong. On the challenge, it meets the subject pretty much head on. On the idea of wanting this hanging on my wall or wanting to return to it for another look, I don't think so, it's just not very exciting. Suggestion: how about cutting out a few more words, like "This is GOD, I will return the Market to normal when you remove your hands from the till" or something like that idea, but much shorter, please. You could call it, "God's Ransom". 7 Swash

Old Time Economy
by Bob

Comment:
I know the sun rays were on purpose and I like them. I hope you don't get to roasted over them! The building itself is a bit overshadowed by the sun light. I like this idea alot, but the image lacks clarity (I think due to the above issues). If this were an idea only site, you'd get a 10 from me, but 8 is the best I can go with the photo issues. Swash

Dreams Of The Fast Lane
by ninauller

Comment:
Cute idea. I would bet that you had to shoot this dark to make the LCD appear, but it makes for a bit of a hard pic to stare at, creates a dark, sad mood, to boot. Great focus, must be a Sony F707 or manual focus. I started you out as a 5, but I have talked myself up to a 7. Have a nice day! Swash

Down the Drain
by TerryGee

Comment:
Who would have thought that "Down the Drain" would be the cliche title of the week? Your's is by far the best of the four. I really like how you caught the water droplets in stopped motion. Very cool. The bill is very sharp! Very nice!!
I upped you from a 9 to a 10. Possible winner here! Swash

Front Page News, But There's a Silver Lining in Every Dark Cloud
by wenyao

Comment:
The shot is on the dark side. The paper looks crinkled, was that on purpose? The shadows on the page distract me a bit. It's a very clear shot,but........
5 Swash

My Corporate Headache
by shortredneck

Comment:
This is reall nice. I know why you placed the pills and lid where you did, and these props are GREAT (I was leading up to suggesting you photograph your account sheet, edit it and re-print it, but wow, that's alot of work for a small chance at an electronic blue ribbon, forget that!) This is very well done and I am going to raise your score from 8 to 9, just to prove it. (what no 10?) Swash

The Shinning Star VP on 42nd Floor
by kwinter

Comment:
Nice shot. I like the thought of the sun flare as the "shining star". VERY minor nit: Executive level employees are usually at the top of the building. Maybe this should be a middle level manager that is outstanding. (kind of a joke) The problem with your sun flare on the building is, it reflected inside the lens to create a green sun blotch above the building in the foreground. The flags in the very front of your foregrounds are barely invisible, and probably not wanted or needed. I started you with a 7, tried to talk myself up to an 8, but failed, still a 7. Swash

Dollars and... Pounds
by bdshort

Comment:
Nice "money" shot. Very clear. Money to world corporation is a small stretch, all by itself, but I am flexible.....I would have liked some more direct connection, but as presented here, I can't think of any suggestions. I am still going to give you an 8. Swash