The First Mistake
by PSUBecker

Comment:
I wanted to ask?

Instead of the Shhh.. action with the finger to her mouth.
What do you think of a seductive glance just away from the camera showing her blue eyes and biting the apple?

Just an idea and my 2 cents;


Calvus

The First Mistake
by PSUBecker

Comment:
I agree with zeuszen
I also think the composition could be improved.
The leaf on the left is distracting. Maybe just the model and grapes?
Was this sunrise or sunset? Did you try any flash fill?
The skin tones look a little blue on my monitor probably due to the shade. Maybe the flash fill may help?
Try having the model look more towards the camera showing more od her blue eyes?

Calvus

Message edited by author 2003-07-30 22:55:11.

Raw Draw
by pupparazzo

Comment:
"Raw Draw" ? Not sure, great shot and I like the idea.

Fast Food, Slow Death
by GolferDDS

Comment:
Good idea! That burger looks dead :) I would have liked to have seen the IV bag stand out more.

Green = Stress ;o) [Mood Rings; back & better]
by Twocentz

Comment:
Nice work, I like the compostion and lighting. Title is a little to much? Maybe simply "Mood Rings"?

Trend-Harry
by Jonatan

Comment:
I don't think you need Trend in the title? Maybe a little better compostion with the books? All I think of is "AUGH The binders" when I look at this? Maybe some laying flat and one on a rack? Nice work

60's Love Shack
by kopa21

Comment:
That is in to good of shape to be a 60's love shack! LOL Got the idea nice work

Downsizing
by Alpine99

Comment:
Nice idea. Maybe a little more of the letter? Great idea

Last Farm for Sale
by DennisF

Comment:
Just a little dark and maybe a play on the title "Farm For Sale"? High vote

Clash of the Titans
by roleychiu

Comment:
LOL! I love it. Want to sell the turntable :)