Pajama Pattern: Stars in Stripes
by klkitchens

Comment:
Maybe these are your pj's, but then again, could be any random material
Ignoring that
I don't like the overexposed star in the foreground. It attracts attention and takes away from the rest. I do like the fading off into the distance of the stars, using both Depth of Field and lighting to achieve that.

Bedtime Hero
by cloudsme

Comment:
Wish I had those PJ's when I was young.......
A different background, other than grey, may have worked better as the outfit is grey and therefore blends a little (and gives a very grey shot). I like the yellow shoes tieing in with the yellow in the top. The cape seems a little noisy though

Not tonight dear -- I have a headache
by ErikV

Comment:
Well put together, Depth of field is spot on IMO. Lighhting looks great, colours work, Nothing I can suggests here.

Let me sleep in!!!
by cloe15

Comment:
Overexposed area on the sheet, although there for the effect of the sun shinning through the window, is a little overdone and distracting for me. Photo looks noisy, skin tones don't look right to me, she is very orange, and the clashing colours also put me off. Pink?orange/Yellow/Brown all together I don't think has worked.

Washday
by Linith

Comment:
Interesting pattern made here which makes for an interesting photo. Great use of colour as well.
I would have been tempted to mismatch all the PJ's in this, therefore having non matching top/pants on each line.

Blooming Pajamas Party
by Structor

Comment:
Clever Idea, and one that stands out. Ofset gives the photo more here (instead of being just a frame seperated into shapes) so works well. Slight uneveness of the light also seems to work, however the bottom left seems a little washed out (faded) looking as a result.

Flower
by hajeka

Comment:
I am not a fan of the overexposed look here. Overexposed alwasy washes out the colour, which is the opposite to what I would think you are meant ot convey with this challenge

Delicate Beauty
by starrlite

Comment:
The Challenge demanded that the photo was black and white, whereas this is still colour.

Photo is good, and would have scored much better had you made it balck and white.

Yellow Pages
by CarlvanHeerden

Comment:
I don't like the shallow depth of field here. The out of focus areas detract from the photo

Orange
by Lonz

Comment:
Not sure about the overexposed slices in the background, and I am not sure the border adds to the photo