Bust a Move
by crabappl3

Comment:
Good shot. Is she more suprised at the amount, his head or where his teeth are heading???? I wonder if the grainy quality of her skin is due to resizing for submission or because of how it was shot. 6

Splash!
by arnit

Comment:
Great capture, obviously you had to do this more than once! You have a good friend to let you do this to him. 8

It's better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all
by heida

Comment:
Greetings from the critique club.

Hi,

This is a very powerful image. Agrees with the challenge and is appropriate to the title.

Your use of a monochrome treatment works really well for this topic.

I find myself agreeing with Zeuszen, quite possibly a first ;}.
The prominence of the chapel does detract from the impact of the figure and marker.

A shallower depth of field or use of judicious blurring may help bring the focus back to the central figure.

I like the composition so would not want to get rid of it all together. It does add to the piece as a whole.

There is a lot of tension and a dark mood/tone. Again something I find very appealing in an image. Especially one done with the purpose of conveying a specific theme.

Darkness for the sake of darkness is all well and good, and you know I do enjoy images that are underexposed or intentionally lacking in bright highlights.

This image, is more than gratuitous darkness, the lack of highlighting is in itself an element. My eye wanders the image seeking more information. I wonder if I look closer will I see more in the grasses? Will I see a name on the cross, etc etc.

I love images that make me do that.

Congratulations on a very fine entry.

peace,
JC

Religious Propaganda
by melongrind

Comment:
I was just running through some of my favourites from this challenge.
I'm sorry you recieved so many low votes. This image deserves better.

Be yourself, Be different, Stand out!
by KING

Comment:
Congratulations on the first ribbon, many more to come I think.

An Unfortunate Cookie
by thelsel

Comment:
Congratulations! Well deserved.

Jam on the Brakes
by Natator

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Well,,, I do believe you've pretty well summed up your image in your comments.

Improvements? I'm assuming the red in the upper left corner is part of the Bike? The fender or some such? For that colour and extra diagonal to not be there is the only thing I can see to change.

As an American, I did know what the phrase was. We do say that here.

Great shot.

JC

New Crayons
by stargazer

Comment:
Unique subject. I could immediately remember the smell from when I was young. I lke how this fills the frame, good detail. Some of the focus is a bit off and this probably should have been a shot where everything was very sharp. 7

The Cuban aroma
by Jason

Comment:
Very nice. May have been a bit stronger if the smoke was more defined nearer the cigar. 8

Fragranced
by sahko

Comment:
Simply stunning, the only comment I would make is the face area could be tidied a bit post challenge. Smooth it just a little. Otherwise, shot of the challenge in my opinion. 10