Wishful Thinking
by ddmckinney1954

Comment:
Nice cat shot, but several things let it down. The noise levels are terrible, possibly caused because it is too dark. This has also affected the saturation levels, which seems a but washed out to me. The shot is not sharp enough. It's a shame the windowframe isn't parallel to the edge of the picture. The cat's expression is great though.

Lunch Break
by sher

Comment:
Very nice... shame you weren't a fraction lower so the bird was entirely in between the shutters. The narrow dof doesn't work for me here... either less dof or much more is needed here I feel. I wish the bird was much sharper. I like the selective desat. The picture looks wonky to me, I'd have tried 'distort' in Photoshop to get everything straight. I'm not sure the centred composition works here.

Looking Out from the Eaton Centre
by gerdagrice

Comment:
Looks too much like a snapshot to me. Loss of detail in the highlights in the sky, converging verticals in your window frame caused by not pointing the camera straight ahead, This could have been fixed by using 'Perspective' in Photoshop. The overall shot needs more contrast IMO. It looks like you were aiming for the window panes to be symmetrical, but the right hand panes are too small here.

Ripe
by melonious

Comment:
Beautiful lemon tree, but the shot looks too much like a snapshot. How many shots did you try of this, using as many different angles as possible and at as many different times of the day for different light levels and colours as possible? The composition seems a bit haphazard... are the lines of the frame meant to be parallel to the edge of the picture? Is the centre of the cross meant to be on one of the junctions of thirds? The reflection on the right looks untidy.

View from platform B
by jjbeguin

Comment:
Some beautiful colours and lines here. I think the sky doesn't quite do it for me though... this picture could be stunning with the right sky. The exposure is very effective leaving just the right amount of shadow detail.

Spring Shower Through Old Glass
by vtruan

Comment:
Some interesting textures and colours here. I'd have been tempted to make a tighter crop so you see the frame but not the lower right pane. Not enough sharpness here for my taste.

Longing for Spring
by jmritz

Comment:
Not quite sure what you were going for here, the overall effect is one of a snapshot. I think it's the glare and reflections in the windows that let the photo down. It's not entirely clear what your point of focus is... is it the woman looking in the window? The writing? The model in the poster? The arrangement of all these elements seems haphazard and not pleasing to the eye.

Rainy Day
by paganini

Comment:
This picture is too symmetrical to sustain my interest.

Window Art
by Sonifo

Comment:
Nice portrait, what a huge shame about the burnt out highlights near the nose.

Back of the bus
by DefyTime

Comment:
Not sure what you're trying to achieve here. I feel like the shot is trying to tell a story, but it's not clear enough. The view out of the window is too cluttered, and the reflections are very offputting. I don't like that part of your model's face has been cropped off.