Keys Day 7.jpg
by ssodell

Comment:
The focus looks good on most of the set, but the ones in front (old Ford ignition key?) lose focus at the bottom. This must be taken from below ignition level to provide that dof. Very monochromatic except the guitar that really stands out.

Day 7 - Mandarin
by kteach

Comment:
I also love the rainbow coloring. I thought it was a computer ribbon cable at first. This may have been good for vanishing point since they go off the corner. I love the diagonal. Good DOF. Am I repeating what everyone else said? That's why I haven't commented on many of them, because it's already been said.

High Velocity Air Circulator
by trevytrev

Comment:
They can charge more for a high velocity air circulator than for a fan. The concentric circles make it look more abstract and really point out the label as the highlight, but the label is pretty dark. Maybe a spot source of light like a penlight would emphasize it more. I can't tell if the blades are turning or if it's shallow DOF.

An Old Faucet
by TheresaA

Comment:
I love the patina. Looks like a very experienced faucet. Nice bokeh. Good catch of an ordinary object and finding beauty in it.

7. I can see clearly now
by suemack

Comment:
I can certainly identify with this. I was trying to figure out whether it was shallow DOF or some magnifying device, but I didn't see sharp edges. I finaly see (no pun intended) the glasses mentioned in the previous comment. How did you get rid of the frames in the picture? Good choice of object to be in focus.

day 6 - nickel
by rachelellen

Comment:
Good capturing of the upright nickel and it's reflection both on the thirds. Nice black background is hard for me to get in this situation.

Day 7 Loose Change Cow
by Chinarosepetal

Comment:
Good angle with her apparently being very upset at me. The shallow DOF really directs the attention to the angry face. She reminds me a little of the Wall Street bull. Is this one of those banks you have to break to open? That would be a shame.

Day 6 - Wild Plastic Frog
by photokariangel

Comment:
Nice bright colors on a gloomy day. Maybe landscape mode with all of the legs and leaving space for the frog to jump would be good.

Day 6
by breadfan35

Comment:
I'm not sure what the object of interest is here, the papers or the York candy. Maybe it's about eating the candy to help you get through the presentation. I think seeing one whole York and the other opened with a bite out of it may be more interesting.

Keys Day 5.jpg
by ssodell

Comment:
Too much white space for me. The keys are too small in the picture. Try cropping closer to the keys, but leave the door handle in to orient to the location. Maybe an angle to the side and/or up/down would be nice.