Jewellery
by lethe

Comment:
Her fingers should not be cropped. It looks odd and disturbing.

GLO
by Diana

Comment:
Duotone doesn't seem appropriate for this. Because of the name of the product, we really should see some orange (presumably in the label). The composition isn't bad. The product is a bit tilted.

Cod Liver Oil
by marbo

Comment:
Interesting composition but I'm not really getting the idea of advertisment from this.

Luscious, Lite and Dreamy! Get Reddi...Reddi Wip Topping!
by charmayne

Comment:
A little bit too tightly cropped at the left and could be a little sharper. Otherwise, I like the composition, the food looks tasty, and the color is nice. Very good effort!

The View of Decades
by LtHousLady

Comment:
What I liked quite a bit about this shot (and I did look at a few times) is the shadow in front of the bench. That is actually what raised it from a 5 to a 6 for me after looking at it for about the third time. I really liked the bit of graphic and tonal contrast it added. Which leads me to think that what may have been lacking for me in was a bit more dynamics in tone. I like the scene and it should appear somewhat serene but perhaps it is a bit too restful. I wonder if perhaps a bit of dodging and burning to add some drama to the sky might improve things. I can already see a section of sky that could be darkened a tad by judiciously burning some middle values and brightening the highlights at the edges of the clouds. This would add depth and drama to the sky which now appears rather flat.

Catch of the Day
by Hye5

Comment:
Really effective! I think it would be better to show a frosty bottle alongside the cap, even if it is just the lower portion of the bottle (since the label is shown prominently on the bottle cap). Still, this is cleverness at its best and the composition is quite nice. There is a bit of shadow area in the corner below the hook. Also, maybe a bit more of the fishing line should be evident. As it is, it kind of looks like a found object.

How Chicago spends the summer
by ChasSourek

Comment:
Wow, what a refreshing sight. And I don't mean the beer, although that looks nice. But this looks like an real honest attempt at advertising (forgive the contradiction in terms). The product is prominently placed against a simple but attractive (and appropriate) background. The beverage actually looks refreshing in it's frosty glass and I can read the label. The glass itself is attractive and harmonizes with the environment. A winning effort!

Pre-Loved
by chookie

Comment:
The idea was to make a photo that looked like an ad not a photo showing advertisement. This looks like what you would see on a yard sale table. Not real appealing product. Photographically, it just seems to be a point-and-shoot snap shot.

No challenges won - pentax mz30 for sale with sigma 70 - 30 mm lens. Any reasonable offers accepted.
by walbland

Comment:
I'll take the filters. LOL! This does look rather like an eBay photo but it doesn't shout 'advertisement' to me.

Lindsay Olive - A Tradition of Quality
by bledford

Comment:
Not a bad effort at all. The cheese and crackers look tasty (it is hard to photograph food well). I think the knife was overduing it a tad. The viewer knows how that one slice of cheese got there and the knife doesn't add anything aesthetic to the composition. It actually leads the eye toward the napkin in the background.