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Brick
12/28/2005 10:18:57 AM
Brick
by Azrifel

Comment:
Nice simple pattern and texture. I'd like focus on the entire image, however, and the triangle of black at the bottom right corner should be cropped out.
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6th Avenue Facade
12/28/2005 10:14:25 AM
6th Avenue Facade
by Car54

Comment:
Very nice. I like the tilted frame. I just wish there was a bit mroe contrast between the dark and middle tones.
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Icy
12/28/2005 10:13:30 AM
Icy
by basia03

Comment:
Nice and simple. It shows a thoughtful eye for pattern. I think there could be a bit less of the empty black space in the frame though. Just curious but did you consider experimenting with rotating the frame in post-editing? Sometimes a more interesting composition emerges in abstract shots like these.
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Neon Light
12/28/2005 10:09:41 AM
Neon Light
by fotomann_forever

Comment:
A good effort ruined by including the lighter head. It isn't neccessary for an effect image and it breaks up an otherwise pleasing abstraction of shape and color. The other beef is the whole image needs to be in sharp focus.
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Green in a Roll
12/28/2005 10:08:40 AM
Green in a Roll
by evylyn

Comment:
This is way too busy and incomprehensible. Isolating a single object against a simple background would be much more effective. I have no idea what those dried-up looking green things with the mints are but they sure aren't helping this composition. The drawing in the foreground area, particularly the staring eyes are drawing a lot of focus too no effect.
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Reflecting on Form
12/28/2005 10:06:19 AM
Reflecting on Form
by benjybobs

Comment:
Very interesting. I like the soft focus, though I suspect others won't. I have a single beef and that is the sharper focus on the object directly behind his nose and left shoulder.
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County Courthouse
12/28/2005 10:04:26 AM
County Courthouse
by Germaine

Comment:
This is too much pattern. It's so busy that my eye doesn't have a chance to rest. I think a tight crop on a single area of tile (either on the stairs or in that area on the wall at the top of the stairs) would have made a more effective statement.
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A Beautiful Mind
12/28/2005 10:02:35 AM
A Beautiful Mind
by crabappl3

Comment:
I like how flat and contrasty this is. I'm guessing others won't but I could be wrong. My only beef is I'd like to see a boost in the saturation levels.
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Serpentine
12/28/2005 09:59:16 AM
Serpentine
by Tammer

Comment:
I think a tighter crop to eliminate the gravel and the snake's face and a bit darker in the shadow areas of the scales. Also, much greater depth of field is needed so that the pattern really stands out. The foreground is too soft.
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Descending Fungi Pattern
12/28/2005 09:56:59 AM
Descending Fungi Pattern
by joycobb

Comment:
Very nice. The lines radiating out at the sides are a distraction for me. I can see you tried hard to blur them out....it's the sort of thing that makes you wish for beyond basic editing so you could clone them out.
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