My Love...
by toddhead

Comment:
She looks angry--like she's clenching. The lighting, background, hair, and makeup are all good.

Sam
by rhipster

Comment:
This is a really cute kid. I wish I liked this portrait better. I can't quite put my finger on it. It might be the soft focus. His hand and arm look in sharper focus than his face. The colors are a bit washed out. His lips look very pale and his hair is dull-looking.

Maraki
by Alexys

Comment:
This is a beautiful model and I like the costume choice. Her face could have used powdering--it's awfully shiny.

Wondering...
by bruski

Comment:
It's weird. This should be cuter but the eyes have an almost glassy look. Maybe it's the bright white reflections and that you can't see any whites?

Bride
by grigrigirl

Comment:
With that fixed stare she looks a bit like a Stepford wife. Very plastic looking. The lighting is nice. The two-toned background is a little odd.

King Bondo
by trying2bstill

Comment:
It looks like there are three chairs bonded to his shoulder. If the lighting was a bit better on the chair he is sitting on it would connect the row of chairs and look less like the other ones are growing from his shoulder. Overall, it's a nice portrait.

Janet
by redmoon

Comment:
The model is pretty and has great coloring. Nice background. I just feel that her face is a bit distorted. It looks like you came in very close with a normal or slightly wide angle lens.

Mr. Matt
by postoakinversion

Comment:
His jaw looks wired shut. The lighting and background are very good. The model needs to look a bit more relaxed.

Innocence
by mariomel

Comment:
She is a very cute kid but her hair looks either greasy or wet. Next time, I would suggest waiting untlil her hair dries or using less hair product. The capture of her eyes is very nice and her lips look natural.

flirtaceous.
by theodor38

Comment:
I think your perspective is a bit off. The nose is quite a bit distorted. Judging by the angle of the shoulder and the wierd distortion, it looks like maybe a self-portrait done with a hand-held camera. If this is the case, I would suggest a tripod (or anything you can set the camera up on) and the timer button. The lighting is good and the model is appealing (except for the distorted features).