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| 11/27/2004 09:52:43 AM |
Generationsby BudComment: I think this needs a softness of light, and of direction of light, that you haven't achieved: this way leaves all the skin seeming quite shiny and ugly. The composition also seems quite threatening - i'm not sure that's what you intend. The adult fist being closed over those small fingers speaks more of enclosure, of suffocation, than of gentleness. I don't know - maybe you intended a more sinister image - it would be unusual for a challenge entry for sure, and it's hard to be certain. |
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| 11/27/2004 09:48:51 AM |
Eroding Sunsetby mirdonamyComment: A slightly too lengthy exposure? Only slightly - just enough for the water to seem not properly focussed: not enough to be blurred exactly, but certainly without the crispness of sharp focus. As the rock silhouette seems OK, it almost has to be motion blur. I'm also not sure about the way you've placed the horizon relative to the rocks. |
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| 11/27/2004 04:31:43 AM |
Hourglassby PerezDesignGroupComment: Technically excellent study - like the background progression of light: really adds that little interest to the negative space, and pulls the eye to the subject. (I've used background light like this myself, and usually been knocked in comments for it - intrigued to know if you're getting something similar). Strong sense of texture on the wood. Just the slightest sense (and it's more significant in such a contrlled an simple image) of too much sharpening in some edges of the wood - top right especially. |
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| 11/27/2004 04:27:08 AM |
Oreo Eulogyby wkoffelComment: Very clever; can't say it does much for me photographically. I wonder if you haven't sacrificed a sense of depth and power of light in the process of the trick. |
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| 11/27/2004 04:25:27 AM |
Winter Migrationby GeneralEComment: A clear technical meeting of the challenge - no, that doesn't read like I mean it (it's a compliment). I mean that the element of passing time is a camera-relevant one, rather than subject-based. I love that you haven't gone to black for your background. I love the intent of this too. Great shot, I hope it does wildly better than I expect it to ;-) |
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| 11/27/2004 04:18:45 AM |
What's Next?by fotodudeComment: Good high-key work - thank god you haven't gone for the 'perfectly' white background which is so annoying to the eye. I can't say I like the composition of subject very much - though it does have a strong element of recession to it, I think it has become too complicated; my temptation would be to have lined them up more, use a stronger diagonal composition ... but I'm not certain that would work any better :-) A pretty common subject approach too. |
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| 11/27/2004 04:14:08 AM |
Pyramids of Egyptby ramiComment: Like the approach tremendously - your processing has achieved that sense of an aged shot very well - has the feel of a early 20th century traveller's shot. Really like the composition too. Subtle, graceful. |
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| 11/26/2004 11:21:15 AM |
Approaching its 141st winterby MaverickComment: There's a ver strong sense of a tilted horizon here - although some of that is an illusion. I'd personally have done something, or gone further, to reduce the difference of light between the building and the sky. A nicely composed image, though - especially like the light on the side of the tower - a shame you couldn't have caught the whole building in that light. It's good to see someone shooting at a sensible time of day :-) |
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| 11/26/2004 11:17:07 AM |
Modern Day Mona Lisaby Bran-O-RamaComment: Excellent portrait - real sense of character. Not wholly excited about your background, but that's just personal. |
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| 11/26/2004 04:44:49 AM |
A Split Secondby typologicComment: Not sure about the very cold blue, nor the cropping of the image leaving just part of the fruit. Some comment about time passing relevant to time stopped - it feels a stretch I'm afraid. |
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