Laundry Day
by Hipychik

Comment:
Like the story here quite a bit. The background works very well, too. Halo effect around her head is kind of patchy and unrealistic on my monitor, particularly on the portrait.

Dry Dock Hoist
by Scholten

Comment:
The panels are busy and there is only a partial border between the top left panel and the right panel. Consistency is also an issue with white balance amongst the panels. Consistent color adjustment and clear, distinct borders would make it easier to appreciate each image and the whole.

Day Flows to Dusk, then Into the Night
by The_Dentist

Comment:
This must have been a tough one to put together! Interesting concept. I think the night sky should be even darker to really emphasize the transition endpoint.

Steeplechase
by andrea22_als

Comment:
That was always a fun race to watch when my kids were on the track team. Shots look a little overexposed but I like the sequence; hope he wasn't hurt as his landing looks a bit awkward!

The Biscuit
by Dona_k

Comment:
He looks like a happy dog. A few suggestions: the lighting seems quite different in the center panel, which leads my eye to the grass instead of the dog. The bit of building in the left panel is distracting when the other panels have pure grass background. Lastly, part of the dog is cut off in both the sitting and standing views; I think they would be better as full body views or head shots, but not this in-between-type view.

Reflections
by vtruan

Comment:
Border pattern is quite distracting and incomplete in quite a few places. Don't know if that's intentional but it detracts from the main scene for me.

Sisters
by xXxscarletxXx

Comment:
Very nice idea. I especially like the continuation of the horizon through the panels. I think I would like the field/dirt colors to be the same in all panels so as not to draw my eye, and the foreground sisters to be at the same distance from the camera (standing on about the same horizontal line across the panels) so I don't keep cocking my head to the side to line them up ... although I suppose they are following the tilt of the horizon.

Oh...to Soar!
by DrAchoo

Comment:
Great sequence! Change in DOF/focus/angle is a little distracting (grass tip is suddenly sharp in the right panel and angle looks different) but overall this is still terrific.

How I Met Your Mother...
by aimeethetoo

Comment:
Perfect storytelling; background never changes so I can't help but focus on what does, and B&W prevents color distractions. Great use of this format :-)

"Head - Shoulders - Knees & Toes"
by pipersd

Comment:
Cute and original idea. It's been an eternity since I heard that song ;-)