See No Evil
by okiesisi

Comment:
Greets from the Critique Club

What amazingly poor and great luck I have following stdavidson to your image. It's poor luck because I can't add anything that he hasn't. He has it nailed. It's good luck because I don't have to add anything.

I'm sorry that I can't add to what he has said.

--Mike

Simply Red
by Elvis_L

Comment:
I'm glad you went with this one. Hope it does ya well.

Kiss
by grigrigirl

Comment:
The title is "Kiss" but I had to look and look to find a kiss. The red is overpowering and the people should probably be in color.

Beautiful Bridge
by sfalice

Comment:
All the red on the bridge is good and should be the focus...but that little bit of red on the boat is really distracting to me.

Wet bike
by Melethia

Comment:
Great shot and reflection, Deb. The reds really jump off the photo.

Day 6:Dumaine st.
by Elvis_L

Comment:
I love the way you brought out the ominousness of the clouds. But the pic is slightly off horizontal.

Message edited by author 2007-05-17 20:16:36.

Warming up
by tjbel05

Comment:
Greets from the Critique Club

This photo is perfectly in focus and very crisp. The colors are spot on.

I'm not too sure on the crop. I'd like to see some more space on the right hand side. As was said earlier there are better body positions to capture than right at the start. I'd like to see him either in the blocks or on his first stride for this shot.

Hope this helps.

--Mike

Blue ribbon by the river
by carofo

Comment:
Greets from the Critique Club
I think a different crop on this would have done it a lot better. If you would have cropped around the rope and the reflection, it would have made the photograph symmetrical.

Maybe if you had sharpened a little more and saturated the colors a bit more to make the rope pop, it would look a little better.

As it is, the focus is dead on and the reflections are magnificent. If one takes the time, they see the rope, a bunch of trees, and a barn.

Keep on shooting.

If this was helpful, please check the box and if you have questions or comments, feel free to PM me.

--Mike

Synchronized Swimming
by karenk

Comment:
Greets from the Critique Club

While this photograph isn't exactly symmetrical, I see where you were going. It's a great capture that you got with the 2 in almost the exact same "pose".

The colors seem just a tad oversaturated. Also, the subjects are pretty much centered. If you would have moved them a bit to the left, making it look as if they were moving through the picture, it might have scored a bit higher.

If this is helpful, please check the box.

--Mike

The Once-ler in his Lerkim
by SherwinJames

Comment:
Awesome POV