Off-Centred Chairby
DavidLevinComment: (Critique Club)
Hey there!
Made me think:
This image has some strong connotations. The light shining through the top window has a sincere feel to it - almost spiritual. At the same time, it enlightens something; The fact that something is missing; Shouldn't htere be someone in that chair? It makes you think that perhaps the person who was in the chair has passed away, and gone to heaven (hence the light), or something similar. A great photograph in that respect.
Title:
A bit boring, to be fair.. If you had called the image "where did She Go" or something that made people think about the image, you might have found that more people were willing to forgive the technical mistakes in this image
Composition:
The books in the background are less than optimal, and I realise the challenge is a bit restricting in itself, so I guess the composition is all right.
Technique:
Focus problems and possibly motion blur. There really isn't any excuse for this, and this is what has cost you a massive amount of points. Sorry to say, but yes. Try to get more used to your camera by taking more pictures with it.
What could be done to rank higher:
Technique. That's all. Had the image been sharp, it would have been 5+, I reckon.
Cheers,
Haje Jan Kamps
www.photocritic.org
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