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| 03/22/2006 10:39:21 PM |
Passionby andreisComment: i think there needs to be more focus on the hand itself here. it's somewhat marginalized on the edge of the image. |
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| 03/22/2006 10:38:08 PM |
Touch of Faithby abhraComment: this is a great image. not the sharpest focus, but i love the composition which extends from upper right corner directionally towards lower left. some sort of a border may have helped with framing, though. |
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| 03/22/2006 09:32:43 PM |
Non-Idle Handsby awpollardComment: ahhh i had written a long set of comments here that didn't get submitted when i voted. i'll try to summarize, don't take brevity to be an insult, please, just don't feel like typing it all out again:
1) a shorter exposure would've been better, would've made the seconds hand look more "jittery" and reduced blur on the minute hand
2) the lighting should probably be reversed so you're highlighting the hands on the clock and reducing the flatness of the lighting there.
3) slight clockwise (no horrible pun intended) rotation of the image because it feels tilted right now.
4) i know you're probably getting hammered with "does not meet challenge" stuff right now and i admit that has affected my score slightly, but i made the above comments as generic technical suggestions to improve the image itself rather than its "appropriateness" for the challenge. |
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| 03/22/2006 08:41:28 PM |
A Mother's Touchby docurrieComment: a beautiful moment. i only have a couple suggestions. the first is that the surface (is that a cloth of some type?) in the lower right detracts a bit from the rest of the image, and the emphasis seems to be less on the hands than the expressions (which is only a problem because of what the challenge is). |
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| 03/22/2006 08:30:06 PM |
The Hand of Timeby kashiComment: i like the idea on this one a lot. there have been a lot of clock "hands" in this challenge so far. black background is definitely a good idea here, but the image would benefit from removal of lint/etc. to the best of your abilities (edit: not by spot editing, er, i mean brushing them off if possible). lots of bits of dust, hairs, and such are glowing on the left side of the image and it detracts somewhat. hair near the blade (pinky side) of th ehand is also lit up and a bit distracting. i'm not suggesting you pluck those hairs out or anything but maybe a different angle for the light would solve that problem. otherwise good job. -6- |
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| 03/22/2006 08:27:10 PM |
Brotherly Loveby Dirt_DiverComment: i like the almost heart shape this has formed. some suggestions that i'm sure you're going to get barraged with, but i'll say them anyway:
1) ah! gotta get rid of that date stamp. "March 17 2006" is intruding upon your composition!
2) for most purposes on this website bigger is better. the size on this was perhaps a bit too conservative.
3) ignoring the date stamp, the weakest element of the photo, I think, is the background. your subject is obviously the hands holding one another, so a background with minimized contrast/busyness would be best. in the case of this photo you have the grass (which isn't a horrible background) giving way to a very bright sky. the result is that the sky looks washed out and "glows" while the subject becomes dim and loses contrast. this is a good idea for a photo, but definitely a more solid, consistent background would be a good idea, because it'll bring out the subject better. |
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| 03/22/2006 08:17:28 PM |
The Hand of Godby The Resplendent SnippycatComment: i like the concept but some things that might help improve this:
the lighting is too dark. i agree a dark background is probably ideal for the theme of this photo, but "God's" hand should be illuminate at least. also, i know you might be limited by available materials by a glob with writing on it and clear dilineations of state size, along with regional color-coding, makes it a bit less believable. i know there are globes available without political information that would seem more appropriate for a whole "hand of god descending on earth" feel. just some thoughts |
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| 03/22/2006 08:14:47 PM |
Portraitby stare_at_the_sunComment: this is an interesting photo. I think the thumb distracts slightly from the composition, as does the one very bright pixel on (your) left eye. i think i might have liked to see this photo with slightly less sharp lighting, i.e. a bit more light filling (your) left side, and maybe a tighter crop that removes the arm from the bracelet down (though to get a clean crop you'd probably have to adjust your arm so it was parallel to your shoulders). clever concept, though. |
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| 03/22/2006 07:52:23 PM |
my skin fits like a gloveby SimonkasprzakComment: something about this image makes my skin crawl haha. i might have had a hard time telling what it was if this wasn't the hands challenge. i like the dark streak moving from just above the wrist towards what i'm assuming is the blade (pinky side) of the hand. one improvement maybe would be to have reduced highlights on the lower wrist/forearm area to brin gout that dark trail more. it's the most captivating part of the image. |
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| 03/22/2006 07:49:40 PM |
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