20-29.jpg
by vultuk

Comment:
Crop the bottom edge to remove the shadow below her chin. Very high contrast shot. Maybe a little overexposed, but I'm not sure.

20-31.jpg
by vultuk

Comment:
I like the image, however it needs a little more light (expose for a little more... 1/8? 1/6?) Change the shoes. They draw the eyes away from the girl. The mood of the shot is good.

Portrait of My Daughter
by jencurrie

Comment:
Soften the foreground lights. They are giving her a blue cast in the face and causing shadowing that doesn't work for this one.

Exit
by phoenix46

Comment:
Tilt it a bit more so that the center axis goes corner to corner. Nice B&W.

Morning Light
by dustinwilson

Comment:
Challenge
- Relevant to the Challenge? Yes
- Is subject unique (vs. unoriginal or rehashed)? Yes

Compostion
- Good or Bad? How can it be fixed? The two trees in the forground are in the way. Zoom in and crop all of the foreground trees. Put the horizon on the top third. Make it about thebarn and the sunrise.
- Good use of Depth of Field? Yes

Lighting
- Good use of light? Yes

Aesthetics/Artistic Appeal:
- What is my reaction or feelings? It's average until you remove all of the foreground elements.

Translucence
by bbmohr

Comment:
The fruity challenge. ;)

A bit fruity.....but!!!
by ecameron

Comment:
The fruity challenge. ;)

Light fruit
by polkop

Comment:
The fruity challenge. ;)

Just a Slice...
by sfarrell23

Comment:
The fruity challenge. ;)

Citrus Bubbles
by jrtodd

Comment:
The fruity challenge. ;)