Bug in a window
by Jdroullard

Comment:
Nice shot through the window. I guess that you wanted to show the frame of the window on the left to let us know that you were shooting through a window - but it doesn't look straight and I find the other cars in the background a bit of a distraction. Perhaps you could have tried to somehow take advantage of the reflection of that red sports car in the door of the Beetle in a different composition?

On Sale
by IndigoButterfly

Comment:
I think this would have been more successful if you'd focused on just one of the dresses. Placing the doorway in the middle of the composition doesn't work for me.

Aston Martin
by Kelli

Comment:
I think this would have been better if you had managed to find a better angle to shoot the car. This crop has chopped off part of the tyre and the bonnet too.

The Flower Shop
by Hipychik

Comment:
Good idea!

Faces at the Odds and Ends Shop
by JeniY

Comment:
Love the tones and water on the glass. But I feel that concentrating on one of these faces may have made a better composition than half-half. I dunno.

Beverly Hills "BETSEY"
by Snake

Comment:
A photo of a mannequin could be quite an interesting subject, but you'd need to present it more cleverly than this.

Chocolate House
by fiona

Comment:
Sweet pic, but there is nothing in it to keep my attention for long.

The Little Match Girl
by faery

Comment:
(No vote) Well done Caroline, looks beautiful. I love the warm tones reflected on Lily's chin - she really looks cold out there (which is an accomplishment because it was probably 30 degrees celcius!).

Let's dance...with a pair of earings
by lenia

Comment:
Hmm. I can hardly see the earrings. Perhaps this could have been lit differently.

Mr. Grumpy Hits the Sack
by dafletchr

Comment:
I love the BW tones - good lighting.