Beach relaxation after travelling.by
JeanComment: Critique Club
Does the subject grab your attention? Yes
Sharpness: Sharp
Is sharpness important? Yes
Exposure: I think the exposure is right.
Contrast: Contrast appears flat to me.
Color: The colors in my oppinion are very accurate.
It appears to be an overcast day and I think this shot was
taken at the right moment.
Composition:
Are the various elements of the photo well balanced within the frame?
I say Yes. Eyes are drawn correctly through the photo. Though the bridge can seem like a slight distraction, without it the picture is boring. You framed this shot well. If it fit the theme a little better in my oppinion you have a top 20 photo here. When I look at this shot I think more of the movie Jaws when Broadie told his son to take the boats and play in the lake or the Lagoon rather than the ocean.
Point of View: Personally I would have gotten down slightly. I think it is important to get some more water in the shot.Don't have to worry about getting the top of the rail in the shot. As long as you have the bridge you are fine.
Overall this is a great photo.
John (TurboTech)
Message edited by author 2003-01-11 20:07:34.