PLAYBOY
by dan_pendleton

Comment:
I got it. This shot was taken by the Police Officer who pulled you over. :-)
Nice Job. Everything is nice and focused. I do not know about the Title. Could have really gotten a laugh out of a title like. "Citation"

Playboating
by vjoz

Comment:
Kind of a right place right time shot and you executed nicely. Did you sell this guy the print????

Outdoor Photographer
by progersct

Comment:
This is a wonderful shot my friend. This cn clearly make a Mag.

Boating Life
by mariomel

Comment:
Color is crisp and you seem to be ok with composition. I do however think that the Title, subject matter, and angle of shot are just not where they could be. Seems to be a static of some sort that I can not pin down. Your Depth is amazing though.

Canadian Gardening
by mcrael

Comment:
Very Sharp. Not a Bad shot at all.

The Roar of a Fast Flowing River
by CLarson557

Comment:
Yes and no. Nice sharpness. Water looks nasty. Not something I would want to swim in.

market ambiance
by timboydwhite

Comment:
Sound of Music. Personally not something I would shoot. But lately there has not been anything that I have wanted to shoot.

Eyes Sq On
by redfig

Comment:
Critique Club:

Composition:
From a glance on this photo I first notice that you did not truly use the rule of thirds. It is important to state that there are many things going on in this shot. I due however think that this shot could have been cropped a little better. Symetrics are important and I think it is important to show the entire surface perimeter of the square. For this to be done you would have to back out just a tad so that you can keep this shot off center.

Contrast Range:
Since your shot appears to be a Black and White I think you have done a good job on the contrast. Tones are well presented here.

Subject Selection:
Focal point is wonderful. The eye truly is the doorway to the soul and in this shot you have captured that.

Lighting:
Ok here is where we start. In portrait photography, Lighting is very important, but it is the shadow that is the true artist paintbrush. I will say you have good shadow here. I am really impressed with how you did this from what you had to work with. Not everyone has professional lighting and there should be no penalty here for it, but there are things that you can do to add to your technique. In the eye here you will notice many "lighting hot spots" These hotspots can seem a tad bit distracting. The very corner of the eye is a tad bit dark, but I will go over that in the overall comment. I do not know how you could fill that in without a lightbrush "Fiberoptic light used for pinpoint lighting in photography"

Overall Comment:
You have a very pleasing photo here. With a little tweaking I would hang this on my wall. This shot in my oppinion is about a 6.5 and from me that is a good score. You did a fine job.

John (TurboTech)

I would like to add that I am not at home so I am not using my computer. However the one being used here has limitatons on how it can be set up to look at pictures since it normally oversaturates things. When I return home I will give this shot another glance and add or detract from the comment. Thank you for you time. :-)

A castle for my princess
by jenarom

Comment:
I like this. Color is very nice.

Where square people live.
by Harz_Joerg

Comment:
Reminds me of Frank Loyd Wright.