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| 10/10/2005 12:02:30 PM |
Dance of Colorsby librodoComment: The blur of the model's arm is disturbing. I realize there's no good way to get blur of the fabric without bluring the arm, but the arm blur is way too distracting... sorry. |
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| 10/08/2005 04:29:04 PM |
Perfect - Good Coffee, Good Musicby kari1Comment: Wow! Gorgeous shot! I love the high contrast of the cups and the black background, I love the shiny spoon, I even love the little halo on the spoon. My only gripe is that the shadow on he left side of the cup in the foreground is a little too dark... just a smidge of fill light, even from something like a desk lamp (or a smidge less light on the rest of the shot and a slightly longer exposure) would give a LITTLE detail in those coffee beans on the left. Also, the details of the coffee beans, especially the ones on the table, seem to be suffering from JPEG compression or some other digital noise. Neat Image would have rescued that, I think.
But those two little gripes don't detract too much from this otherwise stunning photo. Great job, and should place in the top 20. |
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| 10/08/2005 04:22:36 PM |
Postcards to Peruse at While Waiting for Your Javaby chefsamComment: Desat/Sepia works well for this photo. Compositon is very good and focus and exposure are right on. On the bad side, the bottom shelf suffers from what is probably lens distortion from a wide angle shot. When you're using a wide angle lens on something with straight lines it's usually better to keep the lines away from the border of the photo a little so it's less noticable. There's also a distinct shadow on the left side of the photo.
Overall a nice photo, though it's on the edge of being linked to the challenge, IMHO... this scene doesn't scream out "COFFEE SHOP" to me. Good job though. |
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| 10/08/2005 04:18:51 PM |
Espresso Abundanceby neophyteComment: Neat! I like the high contrast of this shot. Everything seems to be in good focus, but there are, in my opinion, too many highlights on the coffee beans. Less harsh flash and a longer exposure would have probably cleared that up and helped a lot. Overall a very nice job! |
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| 10/07/2005 10:55:58 PM |
The Sence of Smellby liebeComment: The entire shot is slightly out of focus, which is really distracting for me. Otherwise an interesting shot, but I'm not sure I like it. I get the idea, but something's off to me. |
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| 10/07/2005 10:48:49 PM |
San Quirico d' Orciaby GordonComment: First thought... "Wow." This is a really good shot. The motion blur adds a sense of life to the sot. The desat gives it the feel of a slightly older or more rustic place... All around well done. |
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| 10/07/2005 10:45:36 PM |
spoon of perksby shadowComment: A nice crisp macro shot. I like the coloration of the background, and even the border works for me. The composition is spot on too. Nicely done. |
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| 10/07/2005 02:52:44 PM |
Study Nightby dw_photoComment: Very sharp and great detail. Focus, crop, and DOF, are all great. Technically a 10.
The entire picture seems to have a reddish cast though, like you applied a touch of sepia or something. I don't think it adds anything to this picture, because everything else about it (sharpness and focus) indicates newness and clarity. Leave the pages of the book white and we're in business here.
The scene also lacks action though, I wish there was some steam rising from the cup, some opened creamers strewn around the table, or an ash tray with a half-dozen smoked butts or something to give this scene a little more LIFE.
Over all though, a good effort, and better than average. |
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| 10/07/2005 02:48:10 PM |
coffee cultureby whiteroomComment: I understand you were going for the over-processed feel here, but this picture, to me, seems... over-processed. :)
SOMETHING is crying out to be in focus, and here about all that looks reasonably in focus is the spoon sticking out of the right side of the saucer.
I think this is a great scene, I just wish I could see more of it. |
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| 10/07/2005 02:46:23 PM |
Homemade coffee = priceless!by TOYComment: Initial reaction: This is a nice photo of a calm and happy scene.
Technically, the exposure is right for the forground subjects, but as a result blows out the highlights outside the window. This normally wouldn't be a problem, except that the top bit of the glass is also blown out, which for me, detracts a lot from the subject. The reflection of the camera in the pot is a lot less than I expected it would be when I first looked at this picture, but is still a lot more than would be preferred. Also, the straw/stirrer in the coffee cup should either be removed altogether or included entirely. Cropped as it is, it leads the eye too far out of the frame and leaves me searching for the "rest of it."
Focus and DOF, sharpness, color and crop are great... just wish you had filtered down that outdoor light a little bit! :)
Good job on a plesant photo. |
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