Day 4 Patience
by Valdo

Comment:
There's such light and sweetness radiating from her! One thing that I do notice when I look at this portrait is how much the bright red of her lips and her blouse stand out. By desaturating those areas, the viewers' focus would tend to go more directly to her pretty face. There's also a noticeable haloing around her head, perhaps from oversharpening or some other PP technique. Or maybe she's just an angel. ;)

Day 4 - bridge
by bdenny

Comment:
Nicely composed with good placement of your subject in the frame. I would agree with coming in for a slightly tighter crop and also shooting at a time when the sun is less glaring to prevent some of those blown highlights. Looks like a great spot to return for more shoots.

Day 3 - Cell Phone Ad
by xXxscarletxXx

Comment:
I like how you've been incorporating two different views within the same frame. This does look like it could be a cell phone add. Nice job!

The sorcerer
by zaflabout

Comment:
Nice direct, sidelong gaze in this portrait. I think that it would have really benefitted from having the lighting less directly focused on the face, as there appears to be a lot of detail lost in the bright highlights. By experimenting with more subtle lighting scenarios, I'm sure that you could get an effectively moody and compelling shot with this composition.

first bike
by pla2

Comment:
Great composition on this one! The expression that you captured is priceless! I can just hear her ringing that little bike bell and feel the pleasure that she must be feeling as she pedals away on her training wheels. Even the characters on her shirt add to the joyful, uplifting mood. Very nice!

Day 3: Dream
by daboardergirl

Comment:
Nice one! It's like you're conjuring up a little dream world, and we're allowed to have a peek in. Similar in composition to your day one, but what an entirely different mood this one projects.

Seriously Six
by levyj413

Comment:
This one really stood out to me during the challenge, and was among my highest votes. Your PP on this enhances the image beautifully, simply highlighting her lovely features without overdoing it. I love the look of vulnerability that you captured. Very nice job, and congratulations on your placement. (I would have had it on the front page, for sure.)

Day-1.jpg
by Krystle

Comment:
What a compelling color combination!

Day Four Isabelle
by TCGuru

Comment:
What a beauty! Love the softness.

Day 3
by walrus451

Comment:
Wow! Super sharp with spot-on lighting! I really like the gaze over the top of the magazine...it draws our attention right to the eyes. I'm pretty sure that this is a self portrait...(?) You're good at these!