Mocksi Brown
by Jason_Cross

Comment:
I love this!! Gonna try it too :P

John's Funny Face
by Spongetoast

Comment:
Hi, this is a comment from the critique club!

The expression of your buddy is pretty cute, but my experience learned that expressions like these don't really work here in challenges; this way it looks more like a snapshot.

The thing with challenges is also that you need to see the technique or subject in the entry what the challenge is about. I don't see "overexposed" in your photo, only the background, and that might just be in a studio.

Good luck in photography, I see in your other entries you have a good eye for good moments!!

Fiery
by zackdezon

Comment:
Hi, this is a comment from the critique club!

Yes, this is overexposed. But looking at your portfolio I think you can do better ;)

The overexposed part almost has no detail left, while you could've done that and still remaining details. Also the half overexposed - half done right might be a bit too obvious, play with the lights and find out how you can do it in a different way.

The colors of your eyes are great though, they really pop out of the photo. Are they as blue like this in real life too? ;)

Hope this was a little helpful :)

Boss
by IreneM

Comment:
Congrats again Irene!

I love the colored spray-tube in the empty side of the bottle.

One small piece of critique: the O of the brand "BOSS" isn't visible enough for me. For an ad-shot like this (used as a real ad) I think that would be better.

But who gives a .... ;)

Game over
by Rino63

Comment:
Hi, this is a comment from the critique club!

First of all I want to say that I love the beautiful b/w tones you used here. The high contrast makes it very dramatic. Light looks good.

Some things I'd change on this one. The composition could've been better, maybe a landscape orientated photo with negative space at the left would've solved that. Also I'd play around a bit with the broom and doll, but I don't know what you've been trying :)

Silent Conversations....week 32 of PAW
by njsabs

Comment:
beautiful!

7
by Majanka

Comment:
my absolute fave, and you know it ;)

No quite myself...
by awpollard

Comment:

Originally posted by Art Roflmao: Awesome! I remember seeing a whole website of these kinds of photos. I'm stumped on the band though. :(

it took some searching with the right keywords, but here it is:

//www.sleeveface.com/

Tomorrow I'm gonna do one, for my PAW-project. This one is cool! Thanks for the inspiration!

Storm Chaser
by Brad

Comment:
this is outstanding!!!

Out of Love.....Week 29 of PAW
by njsabs

Comment:
gorgeous..

love the light here, again. great job, I bet they are very happy with the results!!!