IMG_5168.JPG
by igoofry

Comment:
On-camera flash. If you look back and compare this to the others, it just doesn't stand up. If you decide to continue with doing portraits, you'll want to look into getting some flash units. But the framing here is nice and if the light were less-harsh, the colors would all go well together.

IMG_5180.JPG
by igoofry

Comment:
The tilt to her head makes the pose seem more fun, and you've even got a big of backlighting going on in her hair on the left, which makes her pop from the BG more.

IMG_5132.JPG
by igoofry

Comment:
Another nice pose. The crop strikes me as being a bit off - perhaps more of her leg, or none of it.

IMG_5142.JPG
by igoofry

Comment:
I really like this one, the pose is good and the models look comfortable. Their clothing is a big factor, with them both in blue jeans, but their shirts being black and white, it adds nice contrast. The lighting here is very nice, and the BG is a nice bokeh.

IMG_5164.JPG
by igoofry

Comment:
This is a nice pose, but the light is a bit harsh. You've got some overexposure to the point of blown highlights on her shirt, and the left side of her face is too hot under her eye. The other thing to watch out for is shadows. I'm just working on this myself, so they stick out in my mind. In this case, the shadow cast by her nose is rather prominant. In natural light, this can only be fixed by adjusting her pose in relation the sun. However, if you have an off-camera flash, you can use it to gently fill that in.

Lucifer Falls - Robert Treeman Park
by vikas

Comment:
Having the wall and especially the red leaves in the foreground really adds dimension and makes this more than just another waterfall shot!

On the way to Treeman Park
by vikas

Comment:
If only the roadsign wasn't there, or even was facing the other way. But as is, it's still a nice capture.

On the way to Treeman Park
by vikas

Comment:
Did you shoot this from the car? It's really nice, I think you got the curve just right, and the golden light and foliage comes together well. I like the big branch at the top, too - adds a bit of unusual interest.

Ben - Treeman Park
by vikas

Comment:
Great shot of ol' fearless Ben!

Ducky Potter
by DeniseBernadette

Comment:
Cute idea, very well done.