Giorgio Armani
by Geocide

Comment:
Armani wouldn't print something like this that had so much lint on the jacket, accented by poor lighting.

Hat Hair is all the rage
by posthumous

Comment:
too soft focus

Back in the day
by moniepenny

Comment:
The angle of this shot is just not flattering. The crop to the head and the angle makes her head look out of proportion. The harsh lighting on her hip is distracting.

Modo
by tjmueller

Comment:
IMO, this is what I see:
Makeup is too dark for her face or the lighting is making it too dark next to the white (highly lit) hand
Hand position on face....cheesy
hip wrinkle....either reshoot or PS out
That belly ring is distrating...it resembles a rolled condom
The arm position is not flattering to her figure....makes her look too soft, not toned
the lighting is uneven
the backdrop quits 1/2 way thru the shot, dividing it in half

Nice lingere
Beautiful girl....just needs to be positioned better with better m/up, lighting and b/g

Texas Fashion
by dinkey

Comment:
I LOVE his ears!

Cat Girl
by Kita

Comment:
Cute girl and kitty. The clothes are a tad oversharpened/too bright.

Make-Up: Alluring Deception
by Coral

Comment:
Sorry but I don't find this alluring, but that is just me. Her lip color appears smudged and with the expression, she almost seems injured or hurt.

piazza sempione
by kiwiness

Comment:
Note the angle of her front leg....it's distorted by the angle of the shot, making her leg look larger thank it probably is. Since the other leg is tucked, the boots are really not necessary....cutting her leg line. Another distraction from the shot is the couch line and the red background....it cuts into the shot also. Nice sultry look but the lighting is uneven on her eyes. Also the angle of her right hand is too severe, making it appear more detached from her arm

Simply Glowing!
by Spartan151

Comment:
Too much glow....very distracting

Accessor'eyes'
by -Bec-

Comment:
In a fashion shot, you need a focal point....what are you trying to "sell". The eyes? The necklace? The eye makeup is cool and you could make this more edgy had you concentrated on more on her eyes and didn't have the severe sideways glance happening. I could see this as a standing shot, shoulders rolled back or forward, facing into a fan blowing her hair back and the face 3/4 turned, over her shoulder. That would display the make-up and the necklace, even tho the makeup is enough. This, of course, is all MHO.