Time Warp
by graphicfunk

Comment:
Very cool idea. I think the transition from face to clock is a bit harsh... I would have left a little more opacity in the face so that it showed through the clock a little bit to give more of an 'overlay' feel instead of a 'replacement' feel.

24 hours!!! Let Me Outa Here
by tooter

Comment:
A creative idea... I like the composition and use of the screen to do a 'double self portrait'. I think the lighting needs a bit of work for the surrounding areas. I am sure you meant the screen to be the center focus but the rest is distracting because it is not prominant enough.

Coke is It
by cryingdragon

Comment:
This is pretty cool but I do not like the border at all. If you want the border I would shrink it down and use a lighter tone of red... sample it from the lighter parts of the can. I would also play with the lighting a bit to keep the burnout from appearing on the can like that as it takes away from the logo. All those things said and this could be a composition for a coke ad!

trash art
by annah

Comment:
I think there is too much brightness on the trash and not enough on the subject. It is like a picture of trash with a girl instead of a picture of a girl with trash.

The Thinking Man, Different Cap
by BrianR

Comment:
To me this looks like a simple picture with a photoshop lighting effect added. There really isnt anything in the composition that really grabs the eye or pulls the attention. Moving the angle to either give the viewer a better look at his face OR a better look at what he is looking at will really help the viewer understand the feeling and meaning behind the photo.

Fall
by xantangummi

Comment:
Nice DOF and pose. The look in the eyes help to captivate the viewer. Some may complain about the slight burnout on the right side of the face but I think it fits.

She's Got The Look
by MamaGould

Comment:
This is wonderful. Great portrait!!

Continental Moon
by Blackbox

Comment:
This must have been tough to get it just right but very nice composition. Any time spent on this was well spent.

Fell
by jrothlisberger

Comment:
Nice composition. So simple yet tells all. Great job!

Orit
by Gaby_G

Comment:
Nice composition but maybe zoomed in a little too tight. Needs some lighting (shadows) on the face though to make it a little more interesting. Nice.