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| 12/15/2002 06:19:15 PM |
Blue Rockets Over the Red Riverby goodtempoComment: Critique Club
INITIAL RESPONSE: Very nice fireworks shot .. nice colors, fit the challenge.
COMPOSITION-CONTENT - The composition is 'nice' but could be better .. I feel lilke missing something in the bottom because this is where the fireworks come from. Some marks in the upper right corner .. a little distracting but not too much. I like the whoe firewrks with it's different area I like the 'blue/purple' 'things' in the middle upper part.
BACKGROUND : nothing special except those marks .. maybe by adjusting the contrast or curves you could have get rifd of them .. but they do not bother me that much.
CAMERA WORK-TECHNICAL- Missed shot, shaky shot.
DIGITAL PROCESSING - TECHNICAL - GOod .. no specific comments. No visible jpeg artefact or noise.
MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO - I like the shot a lot... Think would have prefered it 'portrait' but maybe you original shot was like this. in tha case .. not that many thing you could have done at post processing/printing.Congratulations!
Lionel |
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| 12/15/2002 05:41:46 PM |
Blue Moonby vtruanComment: Critique Club
INITIAL RESPONSE: WAOW. Really appealing .. blue .. Really greta picture
COMPOSITION-CONTENT - Good composition and content ... nothing to say .. the vignetting looks aproriate to me or do not bother me .. it make us looking trought the lens with you ...
BACKGROUND-None. Nothing specific .. vignetting is part of the backgroud (see above)
CAMERA WORK-TECHNICAL- Some noise. I have never really seen amateur astronoical picture .. but the noise seems to be very well handled in that case and give some 'atmosphere' to the shot
DIGITAL PROCESSING - TECHNICAL - See above .. I do not really know what to expect for such a shot.
MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO - A great great shot .. I would lilke to have done that one .; I am been wondering recently what scope should I get (no too expensive) to do something like that. It looks like a 20x does it. Anyway .. I like the picture really a lot . .congratulations
Lionel
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| 12/08/2002 08:26:13 PM |
Water level on the rise againby jjbeguinComment: INITIAL RESPONSE: Nice 'flod' picture with a touch of humor. Very adequate to the challenge. Brown picture with touch of color drawing the eye.
Composition/Background :
Nice comosition (like framing the center of the picture) . Maybe would have been a little better with the toy truck not 'touching' the reflection of the house (maybe). I like the contrast bertween the gree/red and the brown of the rest of the picture. Maybe some 'unused and distracted space' at the bottom. (Maybe try to crop less to remove the bottom part and the 'block( in the reflection at the bottom. Try to crop a 640x427 for this one (maybe)
TECHNICAL : I like the exposure a little bark/somber ....it makes the picture a good 'flood documentary' picture. Good depth of field.
DIGITAL PROCESSING : Not too oversharpened wich I like , the surface of the water has details which I like.
MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO - I like that picture .. I do not find it 'appealing' but I like it. I wish you had done a little better in that challenge.
Lionel
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| 12/08/2002 07:42:27 PM |
Christmas Season is Upon Us ( small town news)by SonifoComment: Critique Club
INITIAL RESPONSE: Nice original Christmas shot. Probably nt technically easy. The pole on the left disturb me a little. NIce tones (though I do not know how to qualify the color).
COMPOSITION-CONTENT - Very nice composition and framing. ANimals are perfectly position to balance the picture. Perfect positioning, the circle of light being in the bottom part preventing the picture to look 'centered'. The pole bother me ... a little by itself but also because it is very close to the animal hean, though not touching it. However, somehow it brings depth to the picture ... probably would have prefered it on the right part (digital processing as a try).
CAMERA WORK-TECHNICAL- Perfect exposure .... light are not too 'blown' thought very bright , nice details in the snow ... good perimeter of light. I would say very very good exposition.
DIGITAL PROCESSING - TECHNICAL - Did you bring the tones through processing ? If yes very good job. Not too oversharpen to my taste
MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO - I like the picture, the atmosphere a lot ... outside dochalleneg I would try without the pole and with the pole on the right (if you're not agains moving things in your picture).
Very good picture.
I would have like taking that one myself ! Congratulations.
Lionel
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| 12/08/2002 07:34:34 PM |
North Hatley Fogby mariomelComment: Critique Club
INITIAL RESPONSE: Appealing .. blue .. a little too centered ? Fit the challenge ? Some 'japanese'/zen touch
COMPOSITION-CONTENT - Nice composition/Reflection .... appropriate color (is it post processing or just natural blue being 'pushed') ? It looks a little too 'centered to me (the 'deck') but could not think about something better. Very nice touch brought by the snow.
BACKGROUND-None/Fog. Very nice foggy atmosphere. I love the fog hiding everything in the background.
CAMERA WORK-TECHNICAL- Nothing special. Good exposure.
DIGITAL PROCESSING - TECHNICAL - I liked that you did not 'push' the contrast. Tones of blues are nice and appropriate.
MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO - I like the 'zen' impression a lot, the quietness of the atmoshpere ... almost magical and 'oout of time'.
I would have like taking that one myself ! Congratulations.
Lionel
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| 11/18/2002 03:25:00 AM |
Caution Yellowby goodtempoComment: Very nice shot color shapersmaybe I would have get rid of the 'whatever you call it' in the upper right corner but very nice.8. Lionel |
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| 11/24/2002 10:27:00 AM |
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| 11/17/2002 03:07:00 AM |
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| 11/06/2002 08:03:00 AM |
A Tricky Treatby alanfreedComment: I do not know that much how to vote this one. the challenge says 'well know legend' ... hard to juged that as well .... 7 for the quality of the shot and the intention even if it's not a 'well known urban legend' .. well maybe it is ... but not to me ;-) Lionel |
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| 10/21/2002 08:13:00 PM |
Triscapeby FrooberComment: Very nice shot ... I like the colors shapes. dramatic effect : medium. 7 Lionel |
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