Venezian Sunset
by tazza

Comment:
Maybe a little too much sky. I think if you zoomed in, which you probably can't because I noticed that you have an A80 and it only has a a 3X optical zoom(I think). Anyway zoom in on the tops of the domes and make that you main point of interest this would look a lot better. In my mind you shot this at the right time of the day. Perfect lighting.

Life among the dead.
by RulerZigzag

Comment:
Good clear photo. I just think it is a little cluttered. Maybe get one tombstone. It seems that the trees are the main attraction. I think if you cropped out the left side of this photo it would be a lot better. That side had nothing of interest to me. Overall good photo though.

In The Beginning....jpg
by Rachel34

Comment:
Sharper focus on the words. Also the background is two different shades. I think if you can make it a solid background that would help.

The World is A Shoe Rack
by JPR

Comment:
Sorry I missed this in the "Want Comments" thread and just noticed it. I like this photo. It is very nicely framed and the b/w makes it look good. Good title. At first glance I didn't like the shoes being there and thought it was a distraction. I am glad I took a few minutes to look at this because now I think they work there. Truly a good photo.

Listening
by Bud

Comment:
Wondering what is shethinking. The only thing that bothers me is the reflections in the glasses and I don't think you can get rid of that without gettine rid of her eyes. The only other thing I see is maybe lighten up your friends face. It is a little dark.

Matt English - www.mattenglish.co.uk 2
by Fleximus

Comment:
Nice shot. From what I gather concert shots are hard to do. The only thing I dislike is his hand, maybe that is what you were going for. It does give a better sense of him playing the guitar, but I think it would look better without it.

Light Race
by RulerZigzag

Comment:
One thing I don't like. See how the rails stand out. Maybe from your flash. Try darkening those and you have a perfect shot in my mind. I love how to lights give off the star look also love the long exposure for the car headlights.

Eyes to Swim In
by just-married

Comment:
Very well done. I love everything about it. I really like the eyes, very interesting. I am sorry I have nothing to say about making it better. If I were you I would frame it. That is a timeless moment and a very well executed shot.

Dare Devil
by Shannon

Comment:
The light on the bottom right is maybe too bright to include in the photo. I keep going to it and I think your intention is to get your viewer to focus on the man. Maybe a lower POV would work better here. It also looks a little noisy but maybe it is just my eyes.

Message edited by author 2005-03-23 19:50:43.

Perfect Line
by peecee

Comment:
Maybe the perfect title for this would be "Oh Shit" This happened to me once in a Home Depot and that is the first two words that came to mind. That would be a funny title. Ok back to the photo. Overall I like it and think it is a great photo. The only things I don't like is how the floor is blurred toward the bottom of the photo and the other toilet is kinda distracting. If you could get that and the roll in focus I think this would be a perfect photo.