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Windsurfing
09/21/2004 11:38:54 AM
Windsurfing
by Olyuzi

Comment:
Thisis a rather tame moment for a windsurfer. The lack of drama severely undermines the purpose of the photograph. This doesn't feel like stopped motion. It simply feels like the wrong moment caught on film. The contrast on the water is quite nice, however.
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No, I am not catching it!!!!!!!
09/21/2004 11:36:42 AM
No, I am not catching it!!!!!!!
by oksamit

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Too much motion blur on ball. Subject matter is confusing. Composition is muddled. Lighting is far too neutral. Overall focus is professional.
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Launched
09/21/2004 11:35:29 AM
Launched
by Patents4u

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Nice light. Excellent center zone focus. However, your background is incredibly distracting. Also, this shot would be stronger if the foreground was in sharp focus since the action is coming towards the foreground.
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Bang!  -- Sore Loser
09/21/2004 11:29:54 AM
Bang! -- Sore Loser
by graphicfunk

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The lighting on each piece betrays the fact that this is a composited photo. This isn't stopped motion. This is a creation in Photoshop. Additionally, the composition is extremely weak.
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Tiger Talk
09/21/2004 11:27:39 AM
Tiger Talk
by elsapo

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A motionless tiger laying on the ground caught with it's jaws in a wide growl simply isn't sufficient to qualify as stopped motion.
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Grandmother's vase
09/16/2004 02:26:50 AM
Grandmother's vase
by neenee1999

Comment:
Composition is awful. You've cropped off the bottom of your subject! IT's not truly centered! Your use of negative space on the right is sloppy. Since your subject is based on symmetry, then you need to take the time to make it TRULY symmetrical. Be more patient with your work and demonstrate a dedication to craftsmanship.
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The old magic mirror
09/16/2004 02:25:05 AM
The old magic mirror
by rhipster

Comment:
Foreground is out of focus. It doesn't feel like a deliberate choice. The smoke is too little to be truly dramatic. The lighting is too harsh. Use a softer light source so it will feel less like a photographer's lighting kit next to a subject. Foreground contrast and color saturation is poor.
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Rainbow's crash
09/16/2004 02:23:14 AM
Rainbow's crash
by menardmam

Comment:
Excellent idea, but the execution is weak. Because of the angle you chose the image appears to be uot of focus or accidentally doubled rather than using a mirror on purpose. Next time consider using a thicker mirror (which will separate the reflect from the water colors even farther) and alter the angle. Work on your focus and exposure as well.
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