Miss 70's
by Frall

Comment:
thought 70's without even reading the title, which is a good thing...

Golden Silk Spider
by spistole

Comment:
there should be a warning on spider image :-)
(but the scare won't affect your score)

American Idol
by punk_kaos

Comment:
At first I didn't like that lid in the lower left corner, but not I think it adds a nice documentary feel to the image. Good work.

W O M B
by hanneke

Comment:
cool conceptual image. nice mood and texture.

DSC_2344aB&W.jpg
by carisakD70

Comment:
This is a very fun shot, but I think the high key aspect has put the focus on your photography rather than on the subject's appearance and character. This wouldn't be a problem, but in your request for comments you stated that these are senior portraits. When I look at this particular image I want to see the models eyes and I want to see the dress.

DSC_2333a.jpg
by carisakD70

Comment:
Hope you don't mind me picking on this a bit, but you did ask for advice.

First I picked this images because I think the lighting is very well done. Nice catch lights in her eyes. The hairlight is not overpowering. There is a decent depth to the shadows.

I do think there are a couple of things you could do to help with the pose:
- the right arm reaching back widens her where she does not need to be wider.
- the top of her right arm being so far forward hides her neck and the top of her chest. A little more open here would have added depth to the image.
- i believe her left arm was up and positioned behind her head. Her arm showing in front of her neck widens her again and leaves we wondering what happened to her arm.

These aren't major problem, but once you reach this level the details really start to count.

Sisters.jpg
by -Bec-

Comment:
Outstanding work

Autumn Sunset
by RiderGal

Comment:
I think the biggest challenge here is that you have wonderful warm light in the sky and cooler daylight balanced light (flash?) illuminating your subjects. I think a gel to warm the light from the left of the frame would have helped.

sweet secret
by Seanachai

Comment:
The thumbnail just doesn't do this image justice. I passed by several times thining this was a typical mom and baby shot, but it's much better than typical.
+ Wonderful matching expressions from mom and baby.
+ Outstanding use of depth of field to bring the focus in to eyes, nose, and lips... the element that seem to match between your subjects.
+ Magnificent tones from your B&W conversion.
10

Not Again!
by Katmystiry

Comment:
Wonderful capture!!! Great lighting and excellent experession. This image will be with her the rest of her life