Seasoned - Pano
by gipper11

Comment:
Hello from the Critique club

An appealing image that meets the challenge.

This is quite an interesting study, I like that you have chosen three different shapes and colours of the leaves. I also like that the floorboards on which the are shown has been carefully and deliberately photographed on the diagonal it makes the end result a lot more dynamic. Those same boards, however, feel a little unreal, as though have been over-sharpened, its not a major issue and I suppose it helps make the leaves a little more prominent. The only small problem is the lighting on the green leaf on the left, it is not as uniform as the others and detracts a little but again its not a major issue.

I'm pleased for you that it has been well received here and got you on the front page, well done, thanks for your entry.

Lady Bug on Wheat
by PartyPaul

Comment:
Hello from the Critique club

An appealing image that meets the challenge

A lovely golden image that has a natural appeal, although it feels somewhat overexposed it suits the nature of the image well. The shallow DOF works well. The ladybird is the obvious focal point for the image and that is where I have a problem. I wish you had composed it more off-centre to the left, I also wish you had completely excluded the distracting sky, so I would suggest a crop just to the right of the furthest tendrils of the ladybird's stalk and just below the lowest point of the sky, I think this would make a big difference to your end result.

Well done, thank you for your entry.

The Summit
by Ja-9

Comment:
Hello from the Critique club

An appealing image that meets the challenge

A very impressive landscape Janine, made even more impressive by the lovely lighting. The water and its lovely reflection make a good foreground point of interest. What a lovely sky you have to complete the effect, however, the upper right feels quite empty in relation to the rest of the frame and I wonder whether a panoramic crop just above the mountains may have improved the end result? It's the nature of this demanding challenge that your image didn't finish higher but it remains a very competent and appealing landscape.

Well done, thank you for your entry.

Convergence
by sfalice

Comment:
Hello from the Critique club

An appealing image that meets the challenge

A great cloudscape your composition works well to emphasise the vast expanse of cloud. I like that you have waited for the cyclist to add additional interest to your image. I think this would have worked better in mono, the cyclists yellow jacket is such a strong focus point it pulls your eyes away from the sky itself, the distant car may also become less obvious in mono. You could really make those clouds stand out against a strong red filtered sky, I think it would give it huge boost of impact.

Well done, thank you for your entry.

Winters Eye
by Phocal

Comment:
Hello from the Critique club

An appealing image that meets the challenge

There's no denying that clouds are definitely the subject here! I like your extreme composition it certainly captures the sunrise moment well, the start of a new day and new opportunities. I also like the resulting distortion from the fisheye lens but it feels unbalanced with the bulk of the land features on the right. In this situation where you are dealing with an obvious distortion like this a better option would have been to tilt the image to give it more balance, it really doesn't matter that your original horizon is way off level. Its good that you have captured some water to enable some reflections too.

Well done, thank you for your entry.

Watch your step !!!
by clickodak

Comment:
Hello from the Critique club

An appealing image that meets the challenge

At first I thought this was the same image as you won your yellow with Marcel, which effectively it is but a slightly different version. I can understand why you would want to do this given your previous success but these sort of challenges are in themselves very challenging and best met with an image that you consider to be your best as opposed to a DPC most successful. This image lacks the impact of your other in terms of processing, the mono tones and contrast are too limited. The image rotation of your other created an illusion and interest that is sadly lacking here. I think you could have tried something a bit more creative with a panoramic crop of the lower half of the shot with a much brighter background with burnt in shadows which would have given you something very different, perhaps you might try it and see what you think?

Well done, thank you for your entry.

6:35 am
by chalice

Comment:
Hello from the Critique club

An appealing image that meets the challenge

I've no doubt that you have a much improved image from the original you describe but I think you may have just started to cross the tipping point in your processing, the sky is very noisy and unnatural looking especially at the top part of the frame. I think the darkening of the lower half has benefited especially given the challenge brief we don't want too much detail we need to have the sky dominate the image as indeed it does. However, the lump on the lower right is spoiling the composition for me I think a crop to remove that would be a big improvement. I'm sure there is a lot of potential in your original washed out image that with more subtle processing could give you an even better end result.

Well done, thank you for your entry.

Amazement
by Phocal

Comment:
Hello from the Critique club

An appealing image that meets the challenge

It is always rewarding to capture a natural expression of awe in a candid shot and to that end you have achieved just that here, I just wish that expression had been created by something much more worthy. Your choice of position and composition is excellent. The interior lighting is good but the outside is harsh and overexposed but the most important part, her face, is well exposed and thats what matters most here. I think you could crop the bottom to the level of her red garment for the benefit of the end result.

Well done, thank you for your entry.

Knock knock, Who's there?
by aslezak

Comment:
Hello from the Critique club

An appealing image that meets the challenge

What an extraordinary bird, very distinctive though your capture is technically sound it just feels rather inanimate as though the bird is stuffed and nailed to the tree. The exposure has worked well for the bird but at the expense of the tree which is significantly overexposed with some loss of detail. I'm sure you have done well to capture this bird, I don't know how rare it is, your lens suggests that you were quite close to it, but I'm sorry I can't really get excited about it, it is missing the wow factor.

Well done, thank you for your entry.

Anna
by ArnaMarie

Comment:
Hello from the Critique club

An appealing image that meets the challenge

You could stage manage these sort of shots but what you have here is the sort of image that shows Anna in a way that you can easily imagine and remember her in your unfortunate separation from her. For that reason the dummy becomes acceptable though I do agree it would be nicer to have seen all her features without it. What is vital in any portrait is to get the eyes nice and sharply focused and that's exactly what you have done and your shallow DOF has placed all the emphasis on that eye which makes it a very effective image. I like the mono processing.

You have got some good critique from patches and I can understand what he is saying but I actually like it the way it is, but what really matters is that you have a very special image that will always mean so much to you so DPC and scores are really quite secondary.

Well done, thank you for your entry.