SURPRISE
by gintay

Comment:
Hello from the critique club

An interesting image that contributes to the challenge

This is certainly a colourful sunset cityscape you̢۪ve captured Gin Tay. In terms of composition, I think you could have made it more interesting by excluding the buildings on the left, I would have cropped it to remove all the buildings from the left where the foreground building is. I would then have lowered the rest of the scene so that the interesting shapes and lights were much lower in the frame giving emphasis to the sunset sky. Hope this helps.

Pattaya Dusk
by riot

Comment:
Hello from the critique club

An interesting image that contributes to the challenge

A lovely soothing tranquil scene. You have identified some of the problems as has one of your commenters too so yes you̢۪re right its probably better not to have too much resolution here. What I̢۪m most troubled with is the sloping sea! There is a definite lean to the left which is not helped by the right shoreline which feels as though its pushing the whole image. In terms of the challenge theme it would work better if there were specific conditions being portrayed, a look at the front page will perhaps convey my meaning better. As always Eugene, an interesting image but it doesn̢۪t quite work as well as it could.

A Cold Winter Night
by jjstudiosphiladelphia

Comment:
Hello from the critique club

An interesting image that contributes to the challenge

This is a very competent cityscape, a nice composition enhanced by the moving clouds in the sky. I like the foreground reflection of the trees but I think there is a good argument for removal of the bright lights reflected, it would be more pleasing without them. I like the silver birch bark and their shapes it makes the foreground more interesting. I̢۪m not keen on the colour balance I would prefer it tweaked to something more natural looking. What your image does not do well is to convey the challenge theme of weather, your title is necessary to help us appreciate it is cold. As you will see from the front page most of the images there convey a particular aspect of the weather.

Ice Fishing
by clickodak

Comment:
Hello from the critique club

An appealing image that contributes well to the challenge

Brr.., it looks very cold there! I like your composition including the nicely curved tracks in the foreground, what I don̢۪t like is everything going on in the background. I̢۪m viewing this on my screen with the top cropped where the shadows start and I̢۪m liking the image much more, it has a much more isolated feel to it which is entirely appropriate for the scene. Your commenter is right it would be impossible to tell what they are doing without the title which proves the value of the right title. Thanks for sharing Marcel

Impending Storm
by Ja-9

Comment:
Hello from the critique club

An appealing image that contributes well to the challenge

Congratulations Janine, a great result for a great image, very deserving. Thats a very complimentary remark from bmartuch but he̢۪s right it does have a feel of the master about it. The mono conversion and exposure are the hallmarks of his work and whilst this doesn̢۪t have the full range of tones you expect to see in his work it is a very good effort. My only minor criticism would be to crop off the bottom darker foreground, I think the whiter base of snow would be better.

Rainbow
by jjstudiosphiladelphia

Comment:
Hello from the critique club

An appealing image that contributes well to the challenge

Welcome to DPC! What a great way to start, I like your approach in your attempt to create an unusual and unique entry, the prism lighting works quite well in adding the ‘burst of colour’ the challenge is asking for. Inevitably the lighting is quite difficult and causing you some problem which on the whole you have handled well. The pose is unusual and quite effective with the emphasis clearly on her lovely face but the bright highlights on her forehead and temple would benefit from a little dodging to reduce their impact. The white light arrow is a little unfortunate in that it is pointing directly to her nose. The other lighting problem is the bright area above her in the background which together with the circle on the left are both a little distracting. The focus and DOF is good with nice separation from the foreground and background.

I̢۪m sure I speak for many here, welcome John, we look forward to more from you soon...

Papa Cardinal In The Snow
by Drake

Comment:
Hello from the critique club

An interesting image that contributes to the challenge

It’s a funny old world isn’t it! Obviously, congratulations for your high score and HM for another lovely cardinal shot but I actually much prefer your other recent entry ‘winter squall’. I prefer the frontal pose of the other but more importantly there is some loss of detail in the intense reds here. These are minor criticisms in another excellent entry, well done Drake

Thaw
by riot

Comment:
Hello from the critique club

An interesting image that contributes to the challenge

Aah, the lovely ice queen! Whatever the light she will always make an impact, though I have to say my initial reaction on first seeing this was not so positive. Whilst the lighting certainly makes for a unique image, the image noise and shadows are not doing her any favours, its leaving her looking bruised above and below the eye and on the nose. To counter those negatives your focus with this lovely shallow depth of field is spot on, ‘the eyes have it’, together with the nose and lips. Your cropping is necessarily tight to minimise the effect of the strongly coloured red light in the background but its not a huge issue in an obviously brightly coloured setting.

Sky Scrapers
by Dr.Confuser

Comment:
Hello from the critique club

An interesting image that contributes to the challenge

It̢۪s often difficult to capture the grandeur of the scene before you in a 2D medium such as photography, I can imagine how awe-inspiring the scene was to you at the time. Whilst the lighting is picking up some of the irregular detail in the rock face it just feels a little too harsh and flat, I think an earlier or later time of day may have helped you to achieve your goal better. The vivid blue of the sky is also too dominant it is taking away interest from the landscape itself. This is a tough challenge to do well in but thanks for your contribution.

• c a l m •
by Ja-9

Comment:
Hello from the critique club

An appealing image that contributes well to the challenge

A lovely landscape Janine. I like your composition with the emphasis on the water and its reflections and the pebbly bottom of the foreground. It̢۪s a good exposure throughout with lovely sharp detail from the large DOF you have used. The composition gives a true feeling of depth and the immenseness of the scene. Nicely done.