Last Whisper
by xianart

Comment:
From the Critique Club

OK keeping it real here. I think you picked a good place to take the shot. It's not to tightly cropped and it does give me a little sense of empty room. The trunk is a nice prop for the shot. However IMO the post processing you did hurt the photograph. I know thats just my opinion but the only thing in the photograph in focus is a portion of the top of the trunk and the lower right side of the window.

I think I know what you were going for here but feel it would have been achieved better with lower light dim out the room instead of selective blurring.

Over all a good location and prop but I really cannot critique the full image because over 2/3rds of it is obscured by blurred post processing. I feel a natural way of approaching your idea would of rendered a very nice photograph.

I hope you find this critique helpful and if you have any questions or concerns feel free to contact me.
SDW

Message edited by author 2006-06-13 08:02:29.

Cellar Dweller
by DrAchoo

Comment:
great job - bump to an 8

sign of life
by tate

Comment:
Looks like two photographers went out shooting together :) Same place at least. Nice photo gives me a great sense of emptiness but I think you prop would of worked better if it was laying down on the floor in the same placement. -bump to an 8

Message edited by author 2006-06-12 00:40:36.

Abandoned Luggage
by artvet

Comment:
Nice photograph. Meet the challenge well. I like the textures and the lighting along with the composition. I would of like to have seen a little more sharpness with the wall slats showing but still you have done a good job!
Bump to a 9

Basement Singularity
by Bear_Music

Comment:
This one is great. Love the wide angle and the lighting. The neutral colors of the room and open space yells empty. And I love the bright blue ball. A good contrast in color. Bump 10

The Solitary Soul
by Cutter

Comment:
Very good job. I like the overall process and photo.

Moth On the Floor
by stare_at_the_sun

Comment:
Nice macro but does not do a good job at all of showing the view an empty room. I wish you well in the challenge.

Judgment Incorporated
by RKT

Comment:
Nice tone, focus, and lighting. I don't like the chair in the middle but still a good photograph.

Desolated Room
by funny pie

Comment:
Nice find.

Things Fall Apart
by gloda

Comment:
Very nice photo. I like the achieved effect for this challenge.