Somebody's Shangri-la
by RKT

Comment:
the coloring on this is great.

Woman
by alonzo4b

Comment:
nice, but it needs to be brighter and have more contrast.

Signs of Autumn
by OdysseyF22

Comment:
too dark, but i like the dof!

Oldman Lake
by aberration

Comment:
i'd like to see this cropped either really wide or really tall. the square crop just isn't the right perspective for this.

Young Love
by Darkend_Sword

Comment:
i wish this were sharper.

Roman Villas Over Looking Lake Como
by AlexSaberi

Comment:
this is really nice, but the coloring detracts imho.

TOZ-66
by gazdi

Comment:
i enjoy the low key lighting on this.

Secrets
by juliejold

Comment:
maybe a tighter crop would help draw more attention to the structures?

Carly.
by jessy_pesce

Comment:
she's really pretty but this is too dark.

Joy-Day-1-Oct-challenge.jpg
by joynim

Comment:
hey, i think this is a really good start. i think the composition is too centered and would be more dramatic with her further left. you can also do some post-processing on the eyes and teeth to make them brighter.

a good way to get a natural pose is to not have her look 90 degrees to one side. have her turn her body about a 1/4 turn away from you and then look at the camera. then her neck won't be so twisty (which, to me, is the most unnatural looking part). :)