Hairspray
by veggie

Comment:
Wait... what year was this taken?!? lol

Skipping Girl, Melbourne 2007
by Retroesque

Comment:
Had to look hard to find the skipping girl... if it weren't for your title, I think I would have missed her. Nice colors... they really pop!

Summer Fashion
by citymars

Comment:
I think the green shirt is more in focus than the girl who I think we're supposed to be looking at. Interesting inclusion on the left....

That Girl
by Cutter

Comment:
Hmmm... not too hard to figure out who shot this one now. She's drop dead gorgeous. Wish the shot gave her a little more context for the challenge...

The way is straight, and the path is wrought fair...
by DrAchoo

Comment:
So beautiful it looks surreal. Congrats on the ribbon!

erin_headshot.jpg
by wavelength

Comment:
I like it! :-)

Tori 5677a.jpg
by Monique64

Comment:
Lovely. I think I'd want to keep her shoulders at just a little bit more of an angle to the camera (i.e. turn her right shoulder away just a little bit more). Everything else looks great.

Tori 5710b.jpg
by Monique64

Comment:
Cute girl. Perhaps too much blue? Ditto on the background.

Tori 5760a.jpg
by Monique64

Comment:
Except for the crop (which you said is coming) I love it. Beautiful smile, gorgeous eyes, love the wind in her hair, the angle that you shot at, the angle of her body to the camera. All of these are working very well together.

Tori 5760b.jpg
by Monique64

Comment:
Even in high key portraits, there needs to be some level of details that help the eye figure out what it is looking at. In this case, I feel like the bottom right portion of her face is simply missing. And while the rest of it might be just a tad harsh, I think I could accept the rest of it, if it weren't for the missing part of her face. Still, you might try turning it down just a notch or two to see if you can bring enough definition back to win back the viewers.