The Blue Door
by rscorp

Comment:
I like a lot about this photo; the environment, the framing, the arresting look of the girl. The light coming from above, however, is darkening the natural shadows under her eyes in an unflattering way. Looks like natural light, and if it is then it's a bit harder to control (wink). It's hard to tell if she's modeling for you or if you saw her and decided to take her photo (the difficulty determining I find to be a very good thing), but if she's posing, perhaps you could alleviate the shadows by having her lift her chin a bit. Very nice work here.

Julia (Self Portrait)
by mocabela

Comment:
Nice high key. Good job avoiding glare on the glasses.

"Home"
by barrow

Comment:
Moving. I like the contrast of the bright colors against the darker mood the photo created and accentuates.

Nick 10
by timmi

Comment:
Nice - the frame adds interest to the portrait. Very handsome child. My only constructive feedback is that the saturation is kicked up a notch too much imo.

A Sneak Peek
by AJFI

Comment:
I agree. Creepy. Bride of Chucky.

River
by magicshutter

Comment:
Not bad at all. Quite nice. I think that the piece of ice(?) midway down on the right draws the eye too much. You might try burning it in a bit.

Beautifull Eyes!
by JeremyFleury

Comment:
Yes, she has beautiful eyes. This could be a very nice photo, but IMO, it suffers from poor post processing. The skin has become plastic from Neat Image, and the hair looks like straw from oversharpening. I would start over with the original. I think there is potential in this shot.

Lost in love
by p_johns

Comment:
Exceptional moment to have captures. It's a wonder he didn't notice you with the camera. 7

Ester
by Dufus

Comment:
The model is breathtaking. The framing is A+. Two things that bother me: 1) the shoulder seems almost as big as the face. For this reason, I think I'd like it cropped square from the top, still showing the shoulder and the peeking over it, but less so. 2) The skin around the mouth and eyes has some strange artifacting. It's present in the hair too, but not distracting there. I'm not sure hwat it is or how to fix it. Despite these items, great shot. 8

Eric
by kellian

Comment:
While I like the clarity and framing, I feel like I'm looking through a peephole at him. Lens distortion? Could be purposeful, but if so I feel the title could better enhance the idea. If accidental, a different lens perhaps?