wrapped around your finger
by tate

Comment:
Excellent. Full of emotion, it tells a story.

I should bring money back home!
by kiumars_kashani

Comment:
Nice take on the challenge. Great portrait.

Let's play!
by AnnaP

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club Anna,

Cool Border collies! I have two myself.

You received some really good comments on this that I feel offer you a lot of insight. The brick wall and the framing alone would make for a really good shot alone, and the dogs playing in the snow would also make for a good shot. With both in the same shot they are competing for attention and overwhelm the viewer. When I look at the photo I see the brick wall, and then it�s like �hey there are two dogs down there too.� One or the other would be better for me.

Technical wise, the snow is very over exposed. Shooting a photo with part snow and part not snow is difficult. Also, the photo is not really sharp and could use a little tweeking of the colors.

Hope you find this helpful. Good luck on future challenges!

Colour Me Greed
by IreneM

Comment:
kind of a stretch on the challenge, but simply an amazing photo.

Lust in yellow
by flavioalima

Comment:
I think I'd like it better without the undies as that is kind of distracting and hard to tell what it is. Great photo still.

The Sloth Within (self portrait)
by RyShu

Comment:
great photo, but your daughter want;s her clock back. For the realistic points, the clock should be facing the bed a little more.

Pride, sloth.
by Mazka

Comment:
better lighting and sharper and this could be really good.

Punk Rock Princess / Wrath
by Photogma

Comment:
Looks more like a yawn to me? She needs more anger in her wrath. I like the look of the photo though.

Do Not Disturb!
by Luck

Comment:
Good idea but poorly executed. Way to soft for me. A little sharper and a hint of something going on through the door and I'd love the photo.

Lusty Snails
by PhilipDyer

Comment:
That's hot! Very sharp and clean, well taken.